列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy such as "go for a grocery shopping" (say "go grocery shopping") and "prevents me to wander" (say "prevents me from wandering"). Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I usually make a list when I go grocery shopping because it helps me stay organized and prevents me from buying unnecessary items. Therefore, having a list is very important for me when shopping.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but is a bit repetitive and could be clearer. Avoid repeating words like "make make" and use linking words such as "first" and "then" properly. Also, try to use more precise vocabulary like "prioritize urgent tasks first, then less critical ones."

範例: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized. First, I prioritize urgent tasks, and then I handle less critical ones. This method always works well for me.

建議: Your answer is relevant and mostly clear, but it could be more concise and natural. Try to avoid repeating similar ideas and use linking words to connect your points. For example, use "because" and "so" to show cause and effect.

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they feel it restricts their freedom. They prefer to act spontaneously, which makes their activities more exciting and adventurous.

建議: Your answer is understandable but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. For example, "I am I might lost it" should be "I might lose it." Also, try to avoid redundancy and use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's more accessible and convenient. I can check the list anytime I want. On the other hand, if I use paper, I might lose it, which would cause problems.

× Yes, I make a list when I go for a grocery shopping.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I go grocery shopping.

The phrase 'go for a grocery shopping' is incorrect because 'shopping' is an uncountable noun here and does not require an article or the preposition 'for'. The correct expression is 'go grocery shopping'. This is a common collocation in English.

× It helps me to stay organized and prevents me to wander around the grocery aisle and buy unnecessary items.

✓ It helps me to stay organized and prevents me from wandering around the grocery aisle and buying unnecessary items.

The verb 'prevent' is followed by 'from' plus the gerund form of the verb. Therefore, 'prevents me to wander' is incorrect; it should be 'prevents me from wandering'. Similarly, 'buy' should be in gerund form 'buying' after 'prevents me from wandering and buying'.

× So it's significant for me to have a list while going to shop.

✓ So it's significant for me to have a list while going shopping.

The phrase 'going to shop' is less natural here. The correct expression is 'going shopping' which is a common English phrase meaning to engage in shopping activities.

× Yes, I always make make a list for my work because it helps me to stay organized and helps me identify which one to prioritize and do the urgent tasks 1st and then do the least critical ones after and it always works.

✓ Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me to stay organized and helps me identify which tasks to prioritize, doing the urgent tasks first and then the less critical ones, and it always works.

The sentence contains a repeated word 'make make' which is a typographical error. Also, '1st' should be spelled out as 'first' in formal speech. The sentence is long and can be improved by clearer structure and word choice.

× Some people don't want to make a list because they feel it restricts them from doing what they want.

✓ Some people don't want to make a list because they feel it restricts them from doing what they want to do.

The phrase 'doing what they want' is acceptable but adding 'to do' clarifies the action and improves the sentence flow.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone rather than on a piece of paper because having a list on my phone is accessible, convenient and I can check the list anytime I want and like.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone rather than on a piece of paper because having a list on my phone is accessible, convenient, and I can check the list anytime I want.

The phrase 'anytime I want and like' is redundant. 'Anytime I want' is sufficient and more natural. Also, a comma is needed before 'and' in a list of three or more items.

× When I put it on a piece of paper and I am I might lost it then it would be a hassle and will have a problem.

✓ When I put it on a piece of paper, I might lose it, and then it would be a hassle and cause problems.

The original sentence has several issues: 'I am I might lost it' is ungrammatical and confusing. 'Lost' should be 'lose' because it is present tense after 'might'. The sentence needs commas to separate clauses and clearer phrasing to express the idea properly.