列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có lỗi ngữ pháp (ví dụ: 'I can see how things I need' không đúng). Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, rõ ràng và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và diễn đạt tự nhiên hơn.

範例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember everything I need and saves time at the store.

建議: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp (ví dụ: 'I often makes' nên là 'I often make') và câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, mạch lạc hơn. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời có tính logic và tránh lặp từ.

範例: Yes, I often make lists for my work, but sometimes they don't help because I feel tired and tend to ignore them.

建議: Câu trả lời không rõ ràng và không liên quan. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, giải thích lý do một cách cụ thể và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp.

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they find it boring or feel restricted by having to follow a plan.

建議: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và diễn đạt không tự nhiên. Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp để thể hiện ý kiến cá nhân.

範例: I prefer making lists on paper because it's easier to write and I can see everything at a glance.

× Well, I usually make a list when I shop because it's very useful and I can see how things I need.

✓ Well, I usually make a list when I shop because it's very useful and I can see what things I need.

The original sentence has a missing relative pronoun 'what' to correctly link 'see' and 'things I need'. This is a sentence structure issue but mainly affects clarity. Adding 'what' makes the sentence grammatically correct and clearer.

× To be honest, I often makes a list for my work and sometimes it's not working, not work good because I'm tired and bored when I see that and I will neglect it.

✓ To be honest, I often make a list for my work and sometimes it doesn't work well because I'm tired and bored when I see it and I neglect it.

The verb 'makes' is incorrect because the subject 'I' requires the base form 'make' (Grammar problem type ID 27). Also, 'not work good' is incorrect; it should be 'doesn't work well' to use the correct negative form and adverb. 'I will neglect it' is changed to 'I neglect it' to maintain present tense consistency.

× I think the root cause of this problem is that people don't want to be a part of. Train, Train.

✓ I think the root cause of this problem is that people don't want to be a part of it.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'Train, Train' which is unclear and likely an error. The phrase 'be a part of' requires an object, so 'it' is added to complete the sentence properly.

× This is a very conflict phenomenon, but I contend the list on a list on paper is more effective and convenient than the other one.

✓ This is a very conflicting phenomenon, but I contend that a list on paper is more effective and convenient than the other one.

'Conflict' is an adjective here but should be 'conflicting' to describe 'phenomenon' correctly (Grammar problem type ID 13). The phrase 'the list on a list on paper' is redundant and confusing; corrected to 'a list on paper'. Added 'that' for clarity and grammatical correctness.