列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答表达了观点，但有语法错误和用词不当，如“helps reminds”应为“helps remind”。建议注意动词搭配和时态一致，同时可以增加具体例子使回答更丰富。

範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember items I might forget, such as groceries for the week or special ingredients for a recipe.

建議: 回答中出现了拼写错误（leagues应为lists），表达不够清晰。建议注意单词拼写，句子结构应更简洁明了，并用连接词使逻辑更连贯。

範例: Yes, I sometimes make lists for my work, but they don't always help because I find it hard to follow the schedule. Therefore, sometimes I just decide my tasks spontaneously.

建議: 回答中语法错误较多，如“is can be hard”，“you wanted”时态不一致。建议注意语法时态和句子结构，同时用更具体的例子说明观点。

範例: In my opinion, some people dislike making lists because when they have many tasks like homework, studying, and work simultaneously, it becomes difficult to organize everything clearly.

建議: 回答较自然，但“then do it on the paper”表达不够准确，建议使用更合适的连接词和表达方式，使句子更流畅。

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone rather than on paper because my phone is always with me, so I can easily check my list anytime and anywhere.

× I think making a list of what I am buying is very helpful because it helps reminds me of the things that I might forget.

✓ I think making a list of what I am buying is very helpful because it helps remind me of the things that I might forget.

这里的动词help后面应该接动词原形remind，而不是第三人称单数形式reminds。动词help后面跟动词时，通常用动词原形。

× Yes, I do make leagues for my work sometimes, but I don't think it works all the time because I find myself not able to follow the schedule I make every time.

✓ Yes, I do make lists for my work sometimes, but I don't think it works all the time because I find myself not able to follow the schedule I make every time.

这里的leagues应为lists，leagues是“联盟”的意思，语境中应使用“列表”lists。

× For my concern, I think making a list is can be hard sometimes when you have multiple tasks at the same time and you wanted to progress a lot in your homework, in your study as well as you're working at the same time.

✓ For my concern, I think making a list can be hard sometimes when you have multiple tasks at the same time and you want to progress a lot in your homework, in your study as well as when you're working at the same time.

句中出现了多余的助动词is，应去掉；另外，you wanted应改为you want以保持时态一致；最后，连接词as well as后面应加when引导时间状语从句，使句子结构更清晰。

× Oh, I prefer to make a list on my phone then do it on the paper because the phone is with me 24 hours a day, so it is very convenient for me to check my list whenever and wherever I wanted to.

✓ Oh, I prefer to make a list on my phone rather than do it on paper because the phone is with me 24 hours a day, so it is very convenient for me to check my list whenever and wherever I want to.

这里用then连接两个动作不合适，应使用rather than表示“而不是”；on the paper应改为on paper，表示“在纸上”；最后，wished to应改为want to，保持时态一致。