列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy such as "I don't I do not forget something." Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, you could say, "Yes, I often make a list before going grocery shopping because it helps me shop efficiently and ensures I don't forget anything."

範例: Yes, I often make a list before going grocery shopping because it helps me shop efficiently and ensures I don't forget anything.

建議: Focus on clarity and sentence structure. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid repetition. For example, you could say, "Yes, I usually make a list of tasks I need to complete at work, which helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget anything."

範例: Yes, I usually make a list of tasks I need to complete at work, which helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget anything.

建議: Improve sentence structure and use more natural expressions. Also, provide clearer reasons with linking words. For example, "Some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming and consider it extra work."

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming and consider it extra work.

建議: Make your answer more fluent and avoid repetition. Use linking words to explain your preference clearly. For example, "I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always have it with me, whereas I might forget a paper list at home."

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always have it with me, whereas I might forget a paper list at home.

× Yes, I often make a list whenever I want to go to the grocery, so it makes the list efficiently and I don't I do not forget something.

✓ Yes, I often make a list whenever I want to go to the grocery store, so it helps me make the list efficiently and I do not forget anything.

The phrase 'go to the grocery' is incomplete; it should be 'go to the grocery store' to specify the place. Also, 'it makes the list efficiently' is incorrect; the intended meaning is that the list helps the process, so 'it helps me make the list efficiently' is correct. 'I don't I do not forget something' is redundant and awkward; 'I do not forget anything' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× Yes, at my work I usually make list that I have what things I have to do.

✓ Yes, at my work I usually make a list of the things I have to do.

The phrase 'make list' is missing the article 'a'. Also, 'that I have what things I have to do' is awkward and incorrect; it should be 'of the things I have to do' to correctly express the list's content.

× So it it helps me to ensure that I don't forget anything there, any task.

✓ So it helps me to ensure that I don't forget any task there.

The repetition 'it it' is a typographical error and should be corrected to a single 'it'. The phrase 'anything there, any task' is redundant; 'any task there' is sufficient and clearer.

× It up to another perception.

✓ It is up to another perception.

The sentence is missing the verb 'is' to be grammatically correct. 'It up to' should be 'It is up to' to form a complete sentence.

× Other people think it is hard work, it is time consuming, so that's why they don't want to make lists.

✓ Other people think it is hard work and time-consuming, so that's why they don't want to make lists.

The original sentence uses commas to separate independent clauses improperly. Using 'and' connects the two ideas correctly. Also, 'time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming' when used as an adjective.

× I prefer to make list on my phone because phone is with me always.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because my phone is always with me.

'Make list' is missing the article 'a'. Also, 'phone is with me always' is awkward; 'my phone is always with me' is the correct and natural word order.

× If I make a list on paper, might I might I forget?

✓ If I make a list on paper, I might forget it.

The phrase 'might I might I forget?' is incorrect and redundant. The correct modal verb usage is 'I might forget it' to express possibility.