列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Votre réponse est un peu longue et répétitive. Essayez de structurer votre réponse avec une phrase principale claire, suivie de détails spécifiques, et évitez les répétitions inutiles. Par exemple, utilisez des mots de liaison pour rendre votre discours plus fluide.

範例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because the market is very large. This helps me avoid forgetting items and saves time.

建議: Votre réponse est claire mais pourrait être améliorée en utilisant des mots de liaison pour mieux connecter vos idées. De plus, essayez d'ajouter un exemple spécifique pour rendre votre réponse plus vivante.

範例: Yes, I sometimes make lists at work, especially for complex tasks. However, for routine jobs, I usually remember everything without writing it down.

建議: Votre réponse manque de clarté et contient des répétitions et des erreurs. Essayez de formuler votre opinion clairement, en évitant les répétitions, et en expliquant vos idées avec des phrases simples et cohérentes.

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming, or they believe they can remember everything without writing it down.

建議: Votre réponse est un peu confuse et contient des erreurs grammaticales. Essayez de structurer votre réponse avec une phrase principale claire, suivie d'explications, et évitez les erreurs comme "more easier".

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient and I always have it with me, unlike a notebook.

× Yes, I often make a list when I go shopping and I find it really helpful and necessary because when I go to the when I was in the market and I often get lost myself because it's a very large place and you see many items and you don't know.

✓ Yes, I often make a list when I go shopping and I find it really helpful and necessary because when I go to the market I often get lost myself because it's a very large place and you see many items and you don't know.

The sentence incorrectly switches from present tense 'I go' to past tense 'I was' which causes inconsistency. Maintaining present tense throughout the sentence is necessary for clarity and coherence.

× Maybe they're too lazy to make a list, or maybe they're too smart that they can Remember Remember everything in their mind.

✓ Maybe they're too lazy to make a list, or maybe they're too smart and can remember everything in their mind.

The original sentence has redundancy ('Remember Remember') and incorrect conjunction usage ('that they can'). The correction removes redundancy and uses 'and' to properly connect the clauses.

× I think making this making making this not a Masjid thing that in deliberating.

✓ I think making this is not a major thing to deliberate.

The original sentence is unclear and contains repeated words and incorrect word choice ('Masjid' instead of 'major'). The correction clarifies the intended meaning with proper word choice and structure.

× So I prefer to make a list on my Absolutely. It's more easier and it's more efficient too.

✓ So I prefer to make a list on my phone. It's easier and more efficient too.

The phrase 'my Absolutely' is incorrect and unclear; it should specify 'my phone'. Also, 'more easier' is incorrect because 'easier' is already a comparative adjective; 'more' is unnecessary.