列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer more natural and complete by avoiding grammatical errors and redundancy. Use a clear topic sentence and add specific supporting details with linking words to improve coherence.

範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember what to buy and ensures I stay within my budget. For example, last week I planned my groceries carefully and avoided unnecessary purchases.

建議: Focus on clarity and grammatical accuracy. Provide a clear topic sentence and use linking words to explain how making lists helps you manage your tasks effectively.

範例: Yes, I often make lists for my work because they remind me of the tasks I need to complete. This method helps me prioritize what to do now and what can wait until later, which improves my productivity.

建議: Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and use linking words to connect your ideas. Also, be more specific and concise to make your answer more effective.

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they feel restricted by the items they write down. Moreover, they may feel disappointed if they cannot complete all tasks or buy everything on their list due to budget constraints.

建議: Your answer is clear but could be improved by adding a topic sentence and more specific supporting details with linking words to enhance coherence.

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it offers many options to rearrange items easily. Additionally, I can share my lists with friends quickly, which is very convenient.

× Yes, I love to make list when I go for shopping and it reminds me what to buy and stay in budget and.

✓ Yes, I love to make lists when I go shopping and it reminds me what to buy and helps me stay within budget.

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' because the speaker refers to making more than one list over time. Also, 'go for shopping' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'go shopping'. Additionally, 'stay in budget' should be 'stay within budget' for proper prepositional use.

× Uh yes Sir. I frequently make list for my work because it remembers me to do the work in a list and it also helped me what I can do now and later whenever I complete the work I.

✓ Uh yes Sir. I frequently make lists for my work because they remind me to do the tasks in order and they also help me decide what I can do now and later whenever I complete the work.

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' to match the context of multiple lists. The pronoun 'it' should be 'they' to agree with the plural 'lists'. The verb 'remembers' is incorrect; it should be 'remind' to agree with plural subject. Also, 'helped' should be 'help' to maintain present tense consistency.

× I frequently make list for my work because it remembers me to do the work in a list and it also helped me what I can do now and later whenever I complete the work I.

✓ I frequently make lists for my work because they remind me to do the tasks on a list and they also help me decide what I can do now and later whenever I complete the work.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect in this context; the correct preposition is 'on' when referring to items written on a list. Also, 'remembers me' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'remind me'.

× Because they can be restricted in list items and they feel bad when they can't complete the task they have written and they can't buy the things they have written because they are not in their budget.

✓ Because they can feel restricted by list items and they feel bad when they can't complete the tasks they have written and can't buy the things they have written because they are not within their budget.

The phrase 'restricted in list items' is incorrect; it should be 'restricted by list items'. Also, 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to match the context. 'Not in their budget' should be 'not within their budget' for correct prepositional use.

× I like to prepare list on mobile because I have a number of options to rearrange it and share with my friends through the mobile.

✓ I like to prepare lists on my mobile because I have a number of options to rearrange them and share with my friends through the mobile.

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' to indicate multiple lists. The preposition 'on mobile' should be 'on my mobile' for clarity. The pronoun 'it' should be 'them' to agree with the plural 'lists'.