列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally clear but a bit long and slightly redundant. Try to be more concise and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, start with a direct answer, then add a reason or condition using linking words like 'because' or 'however'.

範例: Yes, I usually make a list when I shop because it helps me remember what I need. However, if I shop casually, I just pick items that catch my eye.

建議: Your answer is good but can be improved by using clearer linking words and avoiding repetition. Also, try to use more varied vocabulary and be more specific about how the list helps you.

範例: It depends on my schedule. When I have fixed tasks, I make a detailed list and follow it carefully, which helps me stay organized. Otherwise, I prefer to work spontaneously without a list.

建議: Your answer has good ideas but the language is a bit formal and could be more natural. Try to use simpler expressions and connect your points with linking words like 'because' and 'also'.

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it too strict and boring. Also, they think lists can limit their creativity and make them feel less free.

建議: Your answer is clear and natural but can be improved by using more linking words and avoiding repetition. Try to combine your reasons smoothly in one or two sentences.

範例: I definitely prefer making lists on my phone because it's always with me, unlike paper which can get lost or damaged easily.

× I do in fact make a list whenever I shop, but that's mostly the case whenever I go out on an errand from home.

✓ I do in fact make a list whenever I shop, but that's mostly the case whenever I go out on an errand from home.

The sentence is grammatically correct; no preposition error found here.

× Otherwise I just randomly pick whatever I like from the shelf.

✓ Otherwise, I just randomly pick whatever I like off the shelf.

In English, when selecting items physically from a surface like a shelf, the preposition 'off' is more appropriate than 'from'. Using 'off' indicates taking something away from a surface, which fits the context better.

× If the schedule requires me to do fixed work, I do make a list and then go through each point on the list categorically.

✓ If the schedule requires me to do fixed work, I do make a list and then go through each point on the list categorically.

The sentence is correct; no preposition misuse detected.

× It may have to do with the fact that they are less disciplined.

✓ It may have to do with the fact that they are less disciplined.

The preposition 'with' is correctly used here; no error.

× Making lists is a part of a disciplined life which a lot of people might not be living, and I do believe that a list might hamper creativity, which in the long run might not be the best option.

✓ Making lists is a part of a disciplined life which a lot of people might not be living, and I do believe that a list might hamper creativity, which in the long run might not be the best option.

No preposition error found in this sentence.

× On my phone, 100%. My phone is always with me and a piece of paper might get lost, it might get torn, someone might just pick it out of my pocket.

✓ On my phone, 100%. My phone is always with me and a piece of paper might get lost, it might get torn, someone might just pick it out of my pocket.

Prepositions are used correctly here; no error.