列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy such as repeating 'I would' and improve sentence structure for clarity. Try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

範例: No, I don't usually make a shopping list because I rely on my memory to remember what I need to buy. I find this method effective since I have a good memory.

建議: Your answer is somewhat confusing and contradictory. Be clear and consistent in your response. Use proper grammar and avoid informal phrases like 'wanna'. Also, explain your opinion clearly with supporting details and linking words.

範例: Yes, I make lists for my work because they help me remember important tasks and ideas. However, sometimes I find making lists unnecessary if the tasks are simple or few.

建議: Your answer is brief and contains repetition. Try to provide more specific reasons and use linking words to make your answer coherent. Also, correct grammar mistakes such as 'time taking' to 'time-consuming'.

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming and unnecessary, especially when shopping for just a few items.

建議: Your answer is repetitive and could be more concise. Avoid repeating phrases and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas logically and provide clear reasons for your preference.

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone rather than on paper because my phone is always with me, making it convenient to check or update my list anytime and anywhere.

× No, I don't really make a list of the grocery because when I go to shopping I take notes on my mind and I remember what I will buy and I would what I would like to buy because I have a great memory.

✓ No, I don't really make a list of the groceries because when I go shopping I take notes in my mind and I remember what I will buy and what I would like to buy because I have a great memory.

The phrase 'make a list of the grocery' should be 'make a list of the groceries' because 'grocery' is a singular noun and here it refers to multiple items, so plural form 'groceries' is correct (Grammar Problem Type ID:1). Also, 'go to shopping' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'go shopping' without 'to' (Grammar Problem Type ID:11). Additionally, 'take notes on my mind' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'in my mind' (Grammar Problem Type ID:11). Lastly, 'I would what I would like to buy' is incomplete and should be 'and what I would like to buy' (Grammar Problem Type ID:26).

× Yes, I do make a list for my work, because it helps me to remember what I wanna write, what I wanna speak, what I wanna have it. And I do think that the making list is very futile, so I don't really need that. Thank you.

✓ Yes, I do make a list for my work, because it helps me to remember what I want to write, what I want to say, and what I want to have. And I do think that making lists is very futile, so I don't really need that. Thank you.

The informal contraction 'wanna' should be replaced with 'want to' for correct grammar (Grammar Problem Type ID:6). 'What I wanna speak' is better expressed as 'what I want to say' for natural English. 'What I wanna have it' is incorrect; 'it' is unnecessary and should be removed (Grammar Problem Type ID:12). 'The making list' is incorrect; it should be 'making lists' to refer generally to the activity (Grammar Problem Type ID:1 and 17).

× Because I think making list is very time taking and it's very it's not very essential to have it when going to going to shopping.

✓ Because I think making lists is very time-consuming and it's not very essential to have one when going shopping.

'Making list' should be plural 'making lists' to refer generally to the activity (Grammar Problem Type ID:1). 'Time taking' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'time-consuming' (Grammar Problem Type ID:13). The phrase 'going to going to shopping' is repetitive and incorrect; it should be 'going shopping' (Grammar Problem Type ID:11 and 26). 'Have it' is vague; 'have one' is clearer (Grammar Problem Type ID:14).

× Yes, I think I do like to make list on my phone rather than the paper because the phone is like slightly available in our hands.

✓ Yes, I think I do like to make lists on my phone rather than on paper because the phone is always available in our hands.

'Make list' should be plural 'make lists' (Grammar Problem Type ID:1). 'Rather than the paper' should be 'rather than on paper' because 'paper' here is uncountable and no article is needed (Grammar Problem Type ID:11 and 22). 'Slightly available' is incorrect; 'always available' is appropriate to express constant availability (Grammar Problem Type ID:13).

× We take the phone whenever, wherever we go, wherever we go, whatever the situation is, we give our phone with us instead of paper.

✓ We take the phone whenever and wherever we go, whatever the situation is, we carry our phone with us instead of paper.

The phrase 'give our phone with us' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'carry our phone with us' (Grammar Problem Type ID:11). Also, the repetition of 'wherever we go' is redundant and should be removed (Grammar Problem Type ID:26).

× So I would like to prefer phone.

✓ So I would prefer to use my phone.

'Like to prefer' is redundant; 'would prefer' is sufficient (Grammar Problem Type ID:14). 'Phone' should be preceded by a possessive pronoun 'my' to specify (Grammar Problem Type ID:12). Also, 'prefer phone' is incomplete; 'prefer to use my phone' is clearer (Grammar Problem Type ID:26).