列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答时语言不够自然，表达有些混乱，且存在语法错误。建议简化句子结构，直接表达观点，并避免重复和犹豫词。

範例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list when I have many items to buy. It helps me remember everything I need.

建議: 回答基本符合要求，但存在语法错误和表达不清。建议使用更准确的词汇和句式，清晰表达观点。

範例: Yes, I often make a to-do list for my work. However, when I feel tired, I sometimes fail to follow it.

建議: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够流畅。建议避免重复，使用更准确的词汇，并提供更具体的理由。

範例: In my opinion, some people dislike making lists because they find it troublesome or feel lazy. However, I find lists helpful for organizing my work and life.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，且“make me more native”表达不准确。建议使用正确的表达方式，并简洁说明理由。

範例: I prefer making lists on paper because I can use colorful pens to create attractive charts, which helps me remember my tasks better.

× I usually list a table, uh to remind me what should I buy.

✓ I usually make a list, uh, to remind me what I should buy.

这里“list a table”用法不正确，应该用动词短语“make a list”表示“列清单”。此外，疑问句语序“what should I buy”在宾语从句中应改为陈述语序“what I should buy”。

× this least cannot get to work.

✓ this list cannot help me get to work.

“least”应为“list”，且表达应为“list cannot help me get to work”，表示清单不能帮助我工作。

× some people maybe think making list is a trouble trouble thing because they maybe a little bit of lazy.

✓ some people maybe think making lists is a troublesome thing because they may be a little bit lazy.

“making list”应为复数“making lists”，表示“列清单”。“trouble trouble thing”重复且用词错误，应为“troublesome thing”。“maybe”用作副词时应为“may be”。

× I prefer make a list on paper.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper.

动词“prefer”后应接不定式“to make”，而不是直接接动词原形。

× to remind me what should I do and I think it's a good habit and make me more native.

✓ to remind me what I should do, and I think it's a good habit and makes me more organized.

宾语从句中“what should I do”应改为陈述语序“what I should do”。“make me more native”表达不当，应改为“makes me more organized”或类似表达，表示“使我更有条理”。