列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, hãy thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget anything when I go to the supermarket.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý chính nhưng cấu trúc câu chưa rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó giải thích thêm với các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

範例: Yes, I usually make a to-do list before starting my workday because it helps me prioritize tasks and feel more confident about my progress.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và câu không hoàn chỉnh, làm giảm tính tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và giải thích rõ ràng với các lý do cụ thể.

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they feel it takes too much time, or they don't understand how useful lists can be for organizing their tasks.

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý chính nhưng câu cuối không rõ nghĩa và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh câu hỏi không cần thiết trong câu trả lời.

範例: I prefer making lists on paper because it's easier for me to organize my tasks and decide which ones to do first or later.

× Certainly is because that is a good way for me to control my business whenever I go to grocery or supermarket and something easily clear to don't forget to buy something.

✓ Certainly, it is because that is a good way for me to control my business whenever I go to the grocery or supermarket and it is easy to remember not to forget to buy something.

The original sentence lacks proper sentence structure and connectors, making it confusing. Adding 'it is' clarifies the subject and verb. Also, 'grocery' and 'supermarket' need the definite article 'the' when referring to specific places. The phrase 'something easily clear to don't forget' is incorrect; it should be rephrased to 'it is easy to remember not to forget'. This improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Certainly is because that is a good way for me to control my business whenever I go to grocery or supermarket and something easily clear to don't forget to buy something.

✓ Certainly, it is because that is a good way for me to control my business whenever I go to the grocery or supermarket and it is easy to remember not to forget to buy something.

The phrase 'go to grocery or supermarket' is missing the definite article 'the' before 'grocery' and 'supermarket'. In English, when referring to specific places like 'the grocery' or 'the supermarket', the definite article is required.

× Certainly is because that is a good way for me to control my business whenever I go to grocery or supermarket and something easily clear to don't forget to buy something.

✓ Certainly, it is because that is a good way for me to control my business whenever I go to the grocery or supermarket and it is easy to remember not to forget to buy something.

The phrase 'something easily clear to don't forget' is incorrect because 'something' is vague and the structure is ungrammatical. It should be replaced with 'it is easy to remember not to forget' to correctly express the intended meaning.

× I think there are several reasons why some people don't like making this because.

✓ I think there are several reasons why some people don't like making this.

The word 'because' at the end of the sentence is unnecessary and creates a fragment. Removing 'because' completes the sentence properly.

× I think there are several reasons why some people don't like making this because. That do have time enough to do this or sometimes they don't realize the importance and the useful of making this.

✓ I think there are several reasons why some people don't like making this. They do not have enough time to do this or sometimes they don't realize the importance and usefulness of making this.

The pronoun 'That' is incorrect here; it should be 'They' to refer to 'some people'. Also, 'time enough' is incorrect word order; it should be 'enough time'. 'The useful' is incorrect; the noun form 'usefulness' is needed. Splitting into two sentences improves clarity.

× I think there are several reasons why some people don't like making this because. That do have time enough to do this or sometimes they don't realize the importance and the useful of making this.

✓ I think there are several reasons why some people don't like making this. They do not have enough time to do this or sometimes they don't realize the importance and usefulness of making this.

The phrase 'the useful' is incorrect because 'useful' is an adjective and cannot be used as a noun here. The correct noun form is 'usefulness'.

× For me, to be honest, I enjoy making this on paper because it's easy for me to follow what kind of works or what kind of job I do first or later. Is that a?

✓ For me, to be honest, I enjoy making this on paper because it's easy for me to follow what kind of work or what kind of job I do first or later. Is that okay?

The word 'works' is incorrect in this context; 'work' is an uncountable noun here and should not be pluralized. Also, the phrase 'Is that a?' is incomplete and unclear; it should be 'Is that okay?' to make sense.