列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it can be improved by adding a linking word and a bit more detail to make it more natural and effective. Try to avoid redundancy and keep the answer concise.

範例: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember what I need. For this, I use my phone, which is convenient and always with me.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammatical errors and redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more specific about how the list helps you. Also, avoid repeating words unnecessarily.

範例: Yes, I make a list for my work, and it helps me remember tasks effectively. Moreover, it allows me to organize my duties better, so I can manage my time efficiently.

建議: Your answer is relevant but contains some errors and unclear phrases (e.g., 'making discs' instead of 'making lists'). Try to use clearer vocabulary and linking words to improve coherence and correctness.

範例: I think it depends on the individual. Some people have a good memory and can keep track of everything mentally, so they prefer not to make lists.

建議: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical mistakes and some redundancy. Use linking words and correct grammar to make your answer more natural and effective. Also, avoid repeating the same phrase multiple times.

範例: I prefer making lists on my mobile phone because I always carry it with me. This way, I can easily access my list and remember my tasks better.

× Yes, I usually make a list when I go for shopping.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping.

The phrase 'go for shopping' is incorrect. The correct form is 'go shopping' where 'shopping' is a gerund used after 'go' to indicate the activity. 'Go for shopping' is not standard English usage.

× Yes, I make a list for my work and it helped me to remember things well and it also helped me in a lot of way.

✓ Yes, I make a list for my work and it helps me to remember things well and it also helps me in a lot of ways.

The sentence mixes present tense 'make' with past tense 'helped'. Since the habit is ongoing, present tense 'helps' should be used. Also, 'a lot of way' should be plural 'a lot of ways' to indicate multiple ways.

× It helped me to organize and and due to this I am able to manage my time well.

✓ It helps me to organize, and because of this, I am able to manage my time well.

The phrase 'due to this' is better replaced with 'because of this' to correctly link cause and effect. Also, 'and and' is a typographical error and should be corrected to a single 'and'. Present tense 'helps' fits better with ongoing habit.

× ...they can keep the track of each and everything in their memory, so that's why they don't like making discs.

✓ ...they can keep track of everything in their memory, so that's why they don't like making lists.

The phrase 'keep the track' should be 'keep track' without 'the'. 'Each and everything' is redundant; 'everything' suffices. 'Making discs' is a mishearing or typo; it should be 'making lists' as per context.

× According to me, my preferred medium for making list is probably my mobile phone. I take my mobile phone wherever I go and I usually use my mobile phone to make a list on them.

✓ According to me, my preferred medium for making lists is probably my mobile phone. I take my mobile phone wherever I go and I usually use it to make lists.

'Making list' should be plural 'making lists' to match general usage. 'Make a list on them' is incorrect; 'them' is plural and does not refer correctly to 'mobile phone'. 'It' is the correct pronoun for singular 'mobile phone'. Also, 'make lists' is more natural than 'make a list' when speaking generally.

× It also help me to remember my things very.

✓ It also helps me to remember my things very well.

The verb 'help' must agree with the singular subject 'It', so it should be 'helps'. Also, 'very' is incomplete here; it should be 'very well' to correctly modify the verb.