列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it contains some redundancy and minor grammatical errors. Try to avoid repeating words and focus on concise, natural phrasing. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I usually make a list when I want to shop efficiently and save time. However, if I'm just browsing for fun, I prefer not to make a list and buy whatever catches my eye. Making a list helps me stay focused and control my spending.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but lacks a clear topic sentence and specific examples. Try to start with a direct response and then explain with details using linking words for coherence.

範例: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me prioritize tasks effectively. For example, by organizing my duties, I can save time and increase my productivity throughout the day.

建議: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and includes filler words like 'uh' and 'like'. Try to avoid fillers and be more concise. Also, use linking words to contrast ideas clearly.

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they feel overwhelmed by seeing many tasks piled up. However, I believe lists improve productivity by helping to prioritize work efficiently.

建議: Your answer is relevant but a bit wordy and has some grammatical mistakes. Try to organize your ideas clearly with proper sentence structure and avoid repetition.

範例: I prefer making lists on paper because I don't use my phone at work. Writing my tasks down and placing the list on my desk helps me stay focused and manage my time effectively.

× But making a list really saves my time and also help me buy what whatever the things I want and it also limits my spend.

✓ But making a list really saves my time and also helps me buy whatever things I want and it also limits my spending.

The verb 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'making a list' (subject-verb agreement). Also, 'spend' should be 'spending' as a noun form here to indicate the act of spending money.

× Like prioritizing your tasks will definitely save your time and it also brings the best in you.

✓ Prioritizing your tasks will definitely save your time and also bring out the best in you.

The verb 'brings' should be 'bring' to agree with the plural subject 'prioritizing your tasks' (subject-verb agreement). Also, 'bring out the best in you' is the correct idiomatic expression.

× Sometimes it feels like making a list also makes you overwhelmed, uh, by stacking up a lot of things like from day-to-day, start to day end to finish your work.

✓ Sometimes it feels like making a list also makes you overwhelmed by stacking up a lot of things from day to day, start to end, to finish your work.

The phrase 'day-to-day' should be 'day to day' without hyphens when used as a prepositional phrase. Also, 'start to day end' is corrected to 'start to end' for clarity and correctness.

× But I think like making list will definitely helps your productivity and, uh, it makes prioritizing your tasks very effectively.

✓ But I think making a list will definitely help your productivity and it helps you prioritize your tasks very effectively.

The verb 'helps' should be 'help' to agree with the singular subject 'making a list'. Also, 'making list' should be 'making a list' to include the article. The phrase 'makes prioritizing your tasks very effectively' is awkward; 'helps you prioritize your tasks very effectively' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× I prefer making lists on a paper rather than phone because when I was at work I don't use my mobile.

✓ I prefer making lists on paper rather than on my phone because when I am at work I don't use my mobile.

The preposition 'on' is used with 'paper' and 'phone' to indicate the medium. Also, 'when I was at work' should be 'when I am at work' to maintain present tense consistency.

× So when I write all the lists on a paper and schedule my time accordingly so that I'll put it on the put it on my table so which will remind me to work on a continuous basis so I can focus effectively.

✓ So when I write all the lists on paper and schedule my time accordingly, I put them on my table, which reminds me to work continuously so I can focus effectively.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrect when referring to 'all the lists' (plural), so it should be 'them'. Also, the sentence is run-on and redundant; restructuring improves clarity and grammar.