列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy, and use correct grammar. For example, say "Yes, I usually make a shopping list because there are many items to remember, and it helps me stay organized."

範例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because there are many items to remember, and it helps me stay organized when I shop.

建議: Your answer is repetitive and has grammatical mistakes. Try to give a clear, concise response with linking words to explain why making lists helps you manage your work effectively.

範例: Yes, I make a list for my work because there are many tasks to complete. It helps me manage my time better and ensures I don't forget anything important.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains irrelevant or incorrect phrases. Try to clearly explain reasons why some people avoid making lists, using simple and correct English.

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to remember things in their mind, or they find lists time-consuming. However, I believe lists are very helpful.

建議: Your answer is too long and has grammatical errors. Try to give a clear, concise answer with linking words to explain your preference and reasons.

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is convenient and I don't have to carry paper. Also, my lists are saved for a long time and easy to access anytime.

× Yes, I make a list when I am going to shopping because there were many different types of items still from my mother and it would be complicated uh, to set in our mind.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I am going shopping because there are many different types of items from my mother and it would be complicated to keep them in mind.

The phrase 'going to shopping' is incorrect; the verb 'go' is followed by the gerund form 'shopping' without 'to'. Also, 'were' should be 'are' to match present tense, and 'set in our mind' is better expressed as 'keep them in mind' for clarity.

× So I make a list and before I go to prefer to shopping.

✓ So I make a list and before I go, I prefer shopping.

The phrase 'go to prefer to shopping' is incorrect. 'Prefer' is a verb and should not be preceded by 'go to'. The sentence is corrected to express preference for shopping before going.

× Yes, I make a list when I am doing work because there was a many different type of work available from the office and there was a making.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I am doing work because there are many different types of work available from the office and there is making.

'Was a many different type' is incorrect; 'many' requires plural noun 'types' and present tense 'are' to match the context. 'There was a making' is unclear and likely incomplete.

× List is very useful for us and there was a different type of works available and there was a management do at the work.

✓ A list is very useful for us. There are different types of work available and management is done at work.

The sentence lacks articles and proper verb forms. 'List' needs 'a' before it. 'Works' should be 'work' as an uncountable noun. 'There was a management do at the work' is incorrect; it is corrected to 'management is done at work' for clarity.

× Many different types of peoples don't like to make a list because their wine was a very sharp and that would be fit in his mind.

✓ Many different types of people don't like to make a list because their mind is very sharp and that fits in their mind.

'Peoples' is incorrect; the plural of 'people' is 'people'. 'Wine' is a wrong word here, likely meant 'mind'. Also, pronouns should agree in number and gender; 'their' and 'his' are inconsistent.

× So many different types of peoples don't like to make English, but that was a wrong making list is a very useful for us.

✓ So many different types of people don't like to make lists, but that is wrong; making a list is very useful for us.

'Make English' is incorrect; likely meant 'make lists'. 'Was' should be 'is' to match present tense. Sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× Well, I prefer to make a list on my phone because it would be good and there was no carry paper with our pocket and it would be saved earlier and the long time in our mobile and it would be very easy to make list and very easy to carry with our.

✓ Well, I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is convenient and I don't have to carry paper in my pocket. It is saved for a long time on my mobile and it is very easy to make a list and carry it with me.

Incorrect prepositions like 'with our pocket' should be 'in my pocket'. 'Saved earlier and the long time' is corrected to 'saved for a long time'. 'Carry with our' is incomplete and corrected to 'carry it with me' for clarity.