列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy by combining ideas and using linking words to improve flow. For example, instead of repeating 'prefer to make a list,' you can say 'I always make a list before shopping because it helps me remember everything I need and makes finding items easier.'

範例: I always make a list before shopping because it helps me remember everything I need and makes finding items easier.

建議: Your answer has good content but needs clearer structure and linking words. Try to start with a direct answer, then explain with specific details using connectors like 'however' or 'when.' Also, avoid fragmented sentences and clarify your points.

範例: I don't usually make lists for work; however, when my schedule is hectic, I prepare a small list with tasks and their times to manage my time better.

建議: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and grammatically correct. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition. For example, say 'Some people don't like making lists because they believe their memory is sharp and think making lists is a waste of time.'

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they believe their memory is sharp and think making lists is a waste of time.

建議: Your answer conveys your preference but could be more fluent and natural. Avoid awkward phrasing and use linking words to explain reasons. For example, 'I prefer using pen and paper over digital devices because I find it easier and more effective.'

範例: I prefer using pen and paper over digital devices because I find it easier and more effective.

× Yes, I always prefer to make a list before shopping so that I can take everything whatever I need and also easy to find everything when we have list.

✓ Yes, I always prefer to make a list before shopping so that I can take everything I need and it is also easy to find everything when we have a list.

The conjunction 'whatever' is incorrectly used here; it should be omitted to correctly express 'everything I need'. Also, the phrase 'and also easy to find' lacks a subject and verb, so 'it is' is added for grammatical correctness. Additionally, 'when we have list' is missing an article 'a'.

× Yes, I always prefer to make a list before shopping so that I can take everything whatever I need and also easy to find everything when we have list.

✓ Yes, I always prefer to make a list before shopping so that I can take everything I need and it is also easy to find everything when we have a list.

The noun 'list' requires the indefinite article 'a' because it is singular and countable. Omitting the article makes the sentence grammatically incorrect.

× I don't usually make a list for my work, but sometimes when I have really hectic schedule I have so many things to do.

✓ I don't usually make a list for my work, but sometimes when I have a really hectic schedule, I have so many things to do.

The phrase 'really hectic schedule' is missing the article 'a' before 'really hectic schedule'. Also, a comma is needed after the dependent clause 'sometimes when I have a really hectic schedule' to separate it from the main clause.

× Then sometimes I like to prepare a small list where I write what time.

✓ Then sometimes I like to prepare a small list where I write the time.

The phrase 'what time' is incomplete and unclear. It should be 'the time' to correctly indicate the specific time written in the list.

× What should I do so that it can be better to save time.

✓ What should I do so that I can save time better.

The original sentence is awkward and unclear. Rephrasing to 'so that I can save time better' clarifies the intended meaning and improves sentence flow.

× Because they think they have a sharp memory, they don't need to create any type of list and they feel it quite waste of time, so just that's why they don't make it.

✓ Because they think they have a sharp memory, they don't need to create any type of list and they feel it is quite a waste of time, so that's why they don't make one.

The phrase 'feel it quite waste of time' is missing the verb 'is' and the article 'a'. Also, 'so just that's why' is redundant; 'so that's why' suffices. 'Make it' is better replaced with 'make one' referring to 'list'.

× Well, I'm a person who you prefer more pen and paper rather than mobile phone and computer.

✓ Well, I'm a person who prefers pen and paper more than mobile phones and computers.

The pronoun 'you' is incorrectly used; it should be 'who prefers' to agree with 'person'. Also, 'more pen and paper rather than' is awkward; 'prefers pen and paper more than' is correct. Plural forms 'mobile phones' and 'computers' are appropriate here.

× So I always prefer to make a list on a paper which is more easier and good according to me.

✓ So I always prefer to make a list on paper which is easier and better according to me.

The phrase 'on a paper' is incorrect; 'on paper' is the correct expression. 'More easier' is redundant; 'easier' suffices. 'Good' should be replaced with 'better' to compare preferences.