列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answers more structured and clear by using complete sentences and avoiding filler words like 'umm' and 'uh'. Also, focus on directly answering the question with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. For example, explain your shopping habit clearly and logically without repetition.

範例: I usually don't make a shopping list. Instead, I check what we need at home before going to the store. This helps me remember the items I want to buy, so I can shop efficiently.

建議: Provide a complete and clear answer by finishing your sentences and avoiding hesitation sounds. Start with a direct response and then add specific details about how you organize your work tasks. This will make your answer more coherent and effective.

範例: I don't usually make formal lists for my work. Instead, I jot down notes about tasks I need to complete either immediately or later. I rely on my memory and these notes to stay organized.

建議: Try to use more precise vocabulary and complete your thoughts clearly. Begin with a clear topic sentence and support it with reasons or examples. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they have a good memory and prefer to remember their tasks without writing them down. For instance, they might find lists unnecessary and time-consuming.

建議: Make sure to complete your sentences and clarify your ideas. Start with a clear preference and explain your reasons logically using linking words. Avoid unclear pronouns and incomplete thoughts.

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because paper lists can easily get lost. Using my phone helps me keep track of my tasks more reliably, which prevents me from forgetting important things.

× I never make a list when I shop, umm, I just uh, see in the house what, umm, what we need and, uh, go to the shop and there remind me what I want to buy and and bought them and sometimes I bought and.

✓ I never make a list when I shop, umm, I just uh, see in the house what, umm, what we need and, uh, go to the shop and there it reminds me what I want to buy and I buy them and sometimes I buy more.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'bought' (past tense) where the present tense 'buy' is needed to match the ongoing or habitual action. Also, 'there remind me' lacks a subject and correct verb form; it should be 'there it reminds me'. Using the past participle 'bought' incorrectly disrupts the tense consistency.

× I never make list also, I just write in the note, uh, some work that I have to do, uh, in umm, at the moment or later, umm.

✓ I never make a list also, I just write in a note, uh, some work that I have to do, uh, at the moment or later, umm.

The noun 'list' is countable and singular here, so it requires the article 'a'. Similarly, 'note' is countable and singular, so it should be preceded by 'a'. Omitting articles before singular countable nouns is a common error.

× I am a person who remember the.

✓ I am a person who remembers things.

The verb 'remember' must agree with the singular subject 'person', so it should be 'remembers'. Also, the sentence is incomplete and lacks an object; adding 'things' completes the thought. Pronoun and verb agreement is essential for clarity.

× Some people don't make this because I think they are people that remember all the things and don't need a list to remind what they want to do or what job they would finished at the.

✓ Some people don't make lists because I think they are people who remember all the things and don't need a list to remind them what they want to do or what job they would finish.

The pronoun 'this' is incorrect; it should be 'lists' to match the context. 'People that' should be 'people who' when referring to persons. Also, 'remind' needs an object 'them'. 'Would finished' is incorrect; it should be 'would finish' (base form after modal). The sentence was incomplete and needed correction for clarity and grammar.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because in the paper maybe she lost and I when if I am a person who don't remind the anything it's a wrong situation and.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because the paper might get lost and if I am a person who doesn't remember anything, it's a bad situation.

The preposition 'in the paper' is incorrect; it should be 'the paper' or 'on paper'. 'She lost' is incorrect; it should be 'might get lost' to express possibility. 'Don't remind the anything' is incorrect; it should be 'doesn't remember anything'. The sentence structure was also corrected for clarity and grammar.