列表— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Do you make a list when you shop?
考生
Not really, online shopping is so easy now I just pick what I want online and order it right away. What's more, I want to buy so many things I probably couldn't list them all anyway.
考官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
考生
Yeah, I do. I write down the work I need to finish each day or week. Every time I finish one, I put a ticket next to it. It works really well. Seeing the finished tasks makes me feel like I'm one step closer to a race, which motivates me.
考官
Why don't some people like making lists?
考生
I think it might be because different works. Like my boyfriend, he never makes his work is 1 project after another, they can't be finished in a day or a week. He think it's not necessary.
考官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
考生
Nice. Actually I like making lists on my computer. I use a Mac and it has the feature light. I can put the To Do List on the desktop. Every time I open my computer I can see the work I need to finish right away.
評估
總分
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
分數: 70.0建議: 回答较为自然，但内容稍显冗长且缺乏结构。建议直接回答问题后，简洁说明原因，避免重复表达。
範例: No, I don't usually make a list when I shop because online shopping is very convenient. I can easily find and order what I need without planning ahead.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
分數: 85.0建議: 回答结构清晰，内容具体且有逻辑。建议使用更多连接词使表达更流畅，同时注意“put a ticket”表达不够准确，可用“tick”或“check mark”。
範例: Yes, I make a list of tasks to complete each day or week. Whenever I finish one, I tick it off. This method works well because seeing completed tasks motivates me to keep going.
Why don't some people like making lists?
分數: 60.0建議: 回答语法和表达不够准确，句子结构混乱。建议先明确回答，再用具体例子支持，注意时态和单复数。
範例: Some people don't like making lists because their work involves long projects that can't be completed quickly. For example, my boyfriend prefers not to make lists since his tasks span over weeks or months.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
分數: 75.0建議: 回答内容具体，但开头“Nice”不自然，且“feature light”表达不清。建议直接回答并准确描述功能。
範例: I prefer making lists on my computer. I use a Mac, which allows me to place my To-Do List on the desktop, so I see it every time I turn on my computer.
文法
× I want to buy so many things I probably couldn't list them all anyway.
✓ I want to buy so many things that I probably couldn't list them all anyway.
原句缺少连接词'that'，导致句子结构不完整。应加上'that'使句子更通顺。
× I think it might be because different works.
✓ I think it might be because of different work.
'work'作为不可数名词，表示工作内容，不用复数形式。原句中使用了复数'works'，应改为不可数形式。
× Like my boyfriend, he never makes his work is 1 project after another, they can't be finished in a day or a week.
✓ Like my boyfriend, he never makes lists because his work is one project after another; they can't be finished in a day or a week.
原句结构混乱，缺少连词和标点，导致表达不清。应补充连词和标点，使句子结构完整且逻辑清晰。
× He think it's not necessary.
✓ He thinks it's not necessary.
主语是第三人称单数，谓语动词应加's'，即'thinks'。
× Nice. Actually I like making lists on my computer.
✓ Actually, I like making lists on my computer.
'Nice'在此处用法不当，且句子开头应加逗号分隔，去掉多余词语使表达更自然。
× I use a Mac and it has the feature light.
✓ I use a Mac and it has a feature called 'Light'.
'feature light'表达不清，应加冠词并说明名称，使表达准确。
× I can put the To Do List on the desktop.
✓ I can put the To-Do List on the desktop.
'To Do List'应写作'To-Do List'，且'desktop'前加定冠词'the'是正确的，此处主要是拼写规范问题。
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