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Part 1

考官

Do you make a list when you shop?

考生

No I don't because I'm not good at create list so it is so time consuming and I like impulse buying so I don't use shopping list.

考官

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

考生

Yes, I usually make it to the list because I'm so forgetful, so if I didn't to the list I would probably forget things.

考官

Why don't some people like making lists?

考生

I think making To Do List is difficult and time consuming. So some people are not good at making work working list. So some people don't like matching list.

考官

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

考生

Yes, I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is very convenient and I can easily add or remove tasks anytime. For example, when I am out, I can quickly check my list without showing extra paper and this helps me avoid forgetting important things and keeps me organized.

評估

總分

總分: 6.0流暢度與連貫性: 6.0發音: 6.0文法: 5.5詞彙: 6.0

Part 1

Do you make a list when you shop?

分數: 60.0

建議: 文法の誤り("create list"は"creating a list"が正しい)と冗長な表現が見られます。また、理由の説明がやや曖昧で具体性に欠けています。より自然で効果的な回答にするために、文法を正し、理由を明確に述べる練習をしましょう。

範例: No, I don't usually make a shopping list because I find creating one time-consuming, and I prefer to buy things spontaneously.

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

分數: 55.0

建議: 文法ミス("make it to the list"は"make a list"、"if I didn't to the list"は"if I didn't make a list"が正しい)があります。内容も繰り返しが多く、より簡潔で明確な表現を心がけましょう。

範例: Yes, I usually make a list for my work because I tend to forget tasks, so it helps me remember everything.

Why don't some people like making lists?

分數: 40.0

建議: 文法と語彙の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです("making work working list"や"matching list"は誤り)。また、内容が単調で具体性に欠けています。正しい表現を学び、理由を具体的に述べる練習をしましょう。

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it difficult and time-consuming, and they prefer to remember tasks mentally.

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

分數: 85.0

建議: 全体的に良い回答ですが、最初の"Yes"は質問に対して直接的ではありません。より自然な回答にするために、質問に直接答える表現を使いましょう。

範例: I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's very convenient; I can easily add or remove tasks anytime, and when I'm out, I can quickly check my list without carrying extra paper.

文法

Verb + -ing form

× No I don't because I'm not good at create list so it is so time consuming and I like impulse buying so I don't use shopping list.

No, I don't because I'm not good at creating lists, so it is very time consuming and I like impulse buying, so I don't use a shopping list.

The verb 'create' should be in the '-ing' form 'creating' after the phrase 'good at'. Also, 'list' should be plural 'lists' to match the context. Additionally, articles and commas are added for clarity.

Incorrect use of prepositions

× Yes, I usually make it to the list because I'm so forgetful, so if I didn't to the list I would probably forget things.

Yes, I usually make the list because I'm so forgetful, so if I didn't make the list I would probably forget things.

The phrase 'make it to the list' is incorrect; it should be 'make the list'. Also, 'didn't to the list' is incorrect; it should be 'didn't make the list'. The verb 'make' is needed here.

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× I think making To Do List is difficult and time consuming. So some people are not good at making work working list. So some people don't like matching list.

I think making a To-Do List is difficult and time-consuming. Some people are not good at making a working list. So some people don't like making lists.

'To Do List' should be 'a To-Do List' with hyphens and an article. 'time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming'. 'work working list' is incorrect; it should be 'working list'. 'matching list' is incorrect; it should be 'making lists'.

重點詞彙

DifficultHard; Troublesome; Inconvenient
ExtraAdditional; Exceptionally; In addition; Addition; Walk-on
GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
ImportantSignificant; Main; Powerful
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