列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to make your sentences clearer and more concise, for example, avoid repeating phrases and use correct verb forms. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because it makes the experience easier and more convenient. This way, I don't forget any essential items I need to buy.

建議: Your answer addresses the question well but has some grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Try to use clearer sentence structures and linking words like 'because' or 'so' to explain your points logically.

範例: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me prioritize tasks. This way, I know which tasks to do first and which ones can wait, which is very important for me.

建議: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and could be more concise. Use correct subject-verb agreement and clearer expressions. Also, try to use linking words like 'because' and 'so' to connect ideas.

範例: I think some people don't like making lists because they feel restricted by them. They prefer to be spontaneous and enjoy doing things without following a list.

建議: Your answer is clear but has some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to use more precise language and correct verb forms. Also, use linking words like 'because' and 'so' to make your reasoning clearer.

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's easier to access them anytime. Unlike paper lists, which I might lose, my phone is always with me, so I don't have to worry about losing my list.

× The reason is having a list when I go for shopping is it make my it make it will make my shopping experience easier and convenient.

✓ The reason is having a list when I go shopping will make my shopping experience easier and more convenient.

The original sentence has redundant and incorrect verb forms ('make my it make it will make'). The correct form is 'will make' to indicate future effect. Also, 'go for shopping' should be 'go shopping' as 'go' is followed by the gerund without 'for'. Additionally, 'easier and convenient' should be parallel: 'easier and more convenient'.

× That way I will also won't be able to forget the essential things that I needed to buy.

✓ That way I will also not be able to forget the essential things that I need to buy.

The phrase 'will also won't be able' is contradictory and incorrect. 'Will' and 'won't' (will not) cannot be used together. The correct form is 'will also not be able'. Also, 'needed' should be 'need' to match the present/future context.

× The reason is I will be able to prioritize which are those things that I needed to do 1st and which are those things that I can do it later.

✓ The reason is I will be able to prioritize which things I need to do first and which things I can do later.

'Needed' is past tense but the context is about future or present tasks, so 'need' is correct. Also, 'which are those things' is awkward; 'which things' is better. 'Do it later' is incorrect; 'do later' is correct without 'it'.

× I think some people doesn't want to make a list because they just don't want to be restricted with the list.

✓ I think some people don't want to make a list because they just don't want to be restricted by the list.

'Some people' is plural, so the verb should be 'don't' not 'doesn't'. Also, the preposition 'restricted with' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'restricted by'.

× I think some people doesn't want to make a list because they just don't want to be restricted with the list.

✓ I think some people don't want to make a list because they just don't want to be restricted by the list.

The preposition 'with' is incorrect after 'restricted'. The correct preposition is 'by' to indicate the agent causing restriction.

× They wanted to be spontaneous when making things and I guess they enjoy just doing some things without a list.

✓ They want to be spontaneous when doing things, and I guess they enjoy just doing some things without a list.

The verb tense 'wanted' is past but the context is general, so 'want' is correct. Also, 'making things' is less appropriate than 'doing things' in this context.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone than on the paper because if I make a list on the phone, it would be easier for me to access the list.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone rather than on paper because if I make a list on the phone, it is easier for me to access it.

The comparison should use 'rather than' instead of 'than' alone. Also, 'on the paper' should be 'on paper' without 'the'. 'Would be' is conditional; 'is' fits better for habitual action.

× I can just browse my phone anytime I want to and like when it's on the paper, sometimes I might lost it so that's the reason why.

✓ I can just browse my phone anytime I want to, and when it's on paper, sometimes I might lose it, so that's the reason why.

'Might lost' is incorrect; 'might lose' is correct as 'might' is followed by base verb. Also, 'on the paper' should be 'on paper'. The sentence is improved by adding commas for clarity.