列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is understandable but has some repetition and grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences clearer and more concise. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and avoid repeating words unnecessarily.

範例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember what to buy and what not to. This way, I can save both time and money.

建議: Your answer is relevant but could be clearer and more structured. Use linking words like 'so' or 'therefore' to connect your ideas. Also, avoid repeating words and try to use more precise vocabulary.

範例: Yes, I make a daily list for my work to plan the next day. This helps me stay organized and complete all my tasks efficiently.

建議: Your answer is a bit unclear and has many repetitions. Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid repeating words. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they prefer to remember everything in their minds and feel confident managing their tasks without writing them down.

建議: Your answer is good but can be improved by reducing repetition and improving sentence structure. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' properly to connect your ideas.

範例: I usually prefer making lists on paper because I enjoy writing things down. Also, I like crossing off tasks by hand when I complete them.

× Yes, I usually do make a list for shopping because it reminds me that what what can I do or shop and what can I do do not so it's it's make me easier for save and save money and time in that way.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list for shopping because it reminds me what I can buy and what I cannot, so it makes it easier for me to save money and time.

The original sentence has incorrect verb forms and redundant words. 'Do make' is unnecessary; 'make' suffices. 'What what can I do or shop and what can I do do not' is confusing and ungrammatical; it should be 'what I can buy and what I cannot'. 'It's make me easier' is incorrect; it should be 'it makes it easier'. Also, 'for save and save money and time' is incorrect; it should be 'to save money and time'. The corrections improve clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Yes, I I daily make a list at my work so for the next day because it reminds me what can I do for the next day and it's according to that I can do all my things easily.

✓ Yes, I daily make a list at my work for the next day because it reminds me what I can do, and according to that, I can do all my tasks easily.

The sentence has awkward phrasing and incorrect word order. 'What can I do' should be 'what I can do' to fit the statement form. 'It's according to that' is incorrect; it should be 'according to that'. 'All my things' is vague; 'all my tasks' is more appropriate. These changes correct present tense usage and improve sentence structure.

× Some people don't like making list because they they they know that they they are. They remind their all the things in in their mind and they can do their work properly according to them.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because they know everything in their mind and can do their work properly according to that.

'Making list' should be 'making lists' to agree in number. 'They remind their all the things' is incorrect; it should be 'they remember everything'. The phrase 'according to them' is unclear; 'according to that' or 'accordingly' is better. The correction addresses pluralization and clarity.

× Well I love to make a list on the papers usually because it I love to do in a written written things in a list. So when the task is completed I love to cross the task in my hand.

✓ Well, I usually love to make a list on paper because I like to write things down in a list. So when the task is completed, I like to cross it off by hand.

'On the papers' should be 'on paper' as an uncountable noun. 'I love to do in a written written things' is incorrect; it should be 'I like to write things down'. 'Cross the task in my hand' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'cross it off by hand'. These corrections fix preposition usage and improve clarity.