列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答表达了观点，但语言不够自然，有语法错误和重复表达。建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，并注意语法正确性。

範例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because I tend to forget items and get distracted by other things in the mall. Having a list helps me stay focused on what I need to buy.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议使用更准确的句子结构，并避免重复词汇。可以更具体说明为什么计划不太有效。

範例: Yes, I like to make plans to set goals for the day. However, sometimes I make too many tasks on my to-do list, so I can't complete all of them, which makes me feel frustrated.

建議: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议直接回答问题，使用连贯的句子，并具体说明原因。

範例: I think some people dislike making lists because they prefer freedom and feel that schedules limit their flexibility.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和重复表达，建议简化句子，注意时态和拼写，表达更流畅。

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always carry it with me, so I won't forget my list like I might with a piece of paper.

× Yes, I'm the type of person who is ready to forget something and easy to distracted by something new in the shop shopping mall.

✓ Yes, I'm the type of person who is ready to forget something and easily distracted by something new in the shopping mall.

这里“easy to distracted”中的“distracted”应该用动词的-ing形式“distracted”前加副词“easily”，表示“容易被分散注意力”。“easy”是形容词，不能直接修饰动词，需用副词“easily”。

× So it's really essential and helpful for me to take a note to focus on what I need.

✓ So it's really essential and helpful for me to take notes to focus on what I need.

“take a note”应改为“take notes”，因为这里指的是记笔记的动作，通常用复数形式。

× Yes, I'm the type of person who likes to make plans which umm can seek some goals and makes the day.

✓ Yes, I'm the type of person who likes to make plans which can set some goals and make the day.

“seek some goals”应改为“set some goals”，因为“set goals”是固定搭配，表示设定目标。“makes the day”应改为“make the day”，因为主语是复数“plans”，动词用原形。

× However, it's not that useful because I usually set too much To Do List so I I cannot make all of them, which frustrates me.

✓ However, it's not that useful because I usually set too many To Do lists so I cannot complete all of them, which frustrates me.

“too much To Do List”应改为“too many To Do lists”，因为“list”是可数名词，表示多个清单时用复数形式“lists”，且“too many”用于可数名词。

× That's a good question. I'm the type of person who likes to make plans so I'm not pretty sure about why people don't like make plans.

✓ That's a good question. I'm the type of person who likes to make plans so I'm not pretty sure why people don't like to make plans.

“don't like make plans”应改为“don't like to make plans”，动词“like”后面接动词时需用不定式“to make”。

× I imagine that it's because they likes they like freedom and schedule makes them cannot have the ability.

✓ I imagine that it's because they like freedom and schedules make them unable to have the ability.

“they likes”应改为“they like”，主语“they”是复数，动词用原形。“schedule makes”应改为“schedules make”，主语复数，动词用原形。“cannot have the ability”表达不自然，改为“unable to have the ability”。

× Definitely on paper I usually forgot to.

✓ Definitely on paper. I usually forget to.

“forgot”是过去式，句意表达习惯性动作，应使用一般现在时“forget”。

× I usually forget to bring something when I going out, not to mention a piece of paper.

✓ I usually forget to bring something when I go out, not to mention a piece of paper.

“when I going out”中“going”应改为动词原形“go”，因为“when”引导的时间状语从句中动词用一般现在时。

× So I like to put something on my smartphone 'cause I won't forgot to bring my smartphone.

✓ So I like to put something on my smartphone 'cause I won't forget to bring my smartphone.

“won't forgot”中“forgot”是过去式，应改为动词原形“forget”，因为“will not”后接动词原形。