列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中存在语法错误，表达不够自然，且信息不完整。建议使用正确的时态和表达方式，直接回答问题并简洁说明原因。

範例: I don't always make a list when I go shopping because sometimes I just go to browse without buying anything.

建議: 回答重复且不连贯，缺乏清晰的结构和连贯的表达。建议直接回答问题，使用连贯的句子，并解释清楚做清单的效果。

範例: Yes, I make lists for my work because they help me remember the tasks I need to complete, which improves my productivity.

建議: 表达不够自然，语法和句子结构有误。建议使用更自然的表达方式，清晰说明原因，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

範例: Some people don't like making lists because seeing many tasks can make them feel nervous and stressed.

建議: 表达基本清楚，但句子结构不够自然，有语法错误。建议简化句子，使用正确的比较结构。

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is more convenient than writing them on paper.

× Not every times because sometimes I went to shopping and for nothing.

✓ Not every time because sometimes I went shopping and for nothing.

“every times”应为“every time”，因为“every”后面应接单数名词。

× Not every times because sometimes I went to shopping and for nothing.

✓ Not every time because sometimes I went shopping and for nothing.

动词“go”后面接动名词形式“shopping”，不需要介词“to”。

× Not every times because sometimes I went to shopping and for nothing.

✓ Not every time because sometimes I went shopping and for nothing.

“went to shopping”中“went”是过去式，后面不需要“to”，应直接接动名词。

× To be frank, I have. I did. I did. Because it can remind me that I have to. I have to finish something.

✓ To be frank, I do. I did. I did. Because it can remind me that I have to finish something.

回答中“have”应使用一般现在时“do”来对应问题的时态。

× Maybe people think when you see the things in the list will make them nervous, it's influenced their emotion.

✓ Maybe people think that seeing the things in the list will make them nervous; it influences their emotions.

句子结构不完整，缺少连接词“that”，且“it's influenced their emotion”语法错误，应改为主动语态“it influences their emotions”。

× Maybe people think when you see the things in the list will make them nervous, it's influenced their emotion.

✓ Maybe people think that seeing the things on the list will make them nervous; it influences their emotions.

“in the list”应改为“on the list”，因为物品通常是“on the list”上列出的。

× Maybe people think when you see the things in the list will make them nervous, it's influenced their emotion.

✓ Maybe people think that seeing the things on the list will make them nervous; it influences their emotions.

“when”用法不当，应使用“that”引导宾语从句。

× I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient, then the making the list on the paper.

✓ I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient, rather than making lists on paper.

“then the making the list on the paper”结构不正确，应使用“rather than”表达比较，且“the list”应改为复数“lists”，去掉“the”。