列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: حاول أن تجعل إجابتك أكثر تنظيماً باستخدام جملة موضوعية واضحة ثم تدعمها بتفاصيل محددة. كما يُفضل استخدام كلمات ربط لتوضيح السبب بشكل أفضل.

範例: I usually don't make a list when I go shopping because I prefer the freedom to choose things I like. For example, I enjoy browsing and picking items spontaneously, which makes shopping more enjoyable for me.

建議: إجابتك غير واضحة ومبهمة. حاول أن تعبر عن رأيك بشكل مباشر وبجمل كاملة ومنظمة مع تجنب التكرار والأخطاء اللغوية.

範例: I usually don't like to make lists for my work because I find them unnecessary. However, sometimes making a list helps me organize my tasks better and complete my work efficiently.

建議: تجنب التكرار واستخدم جمل واضحة ومترابطة. حاول أن تقدم أسباباً محددة ومنطقية مع استخدام كلمات ربط مناسبة.

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it complicated and time-consuming. Additionally, they may feel that it limits their flexibility when planning their activities.

建議: حاول أن تكون إجابتك أكثر وضوحاً وتنظيماً مع استخدام جمل كاملة وتجنب التكرار. اشرح السبب بشكل مفصل مع ربط الأفكار.

範例: I usually make my lists on my phone because it helps me remember everything. For instance, I set alarms or reminders, so I don't forget to buy important items.

× Well, I think that some people don't like make list because that is that is very complicated and need much of money and much of money and times.

✓ Well, I think that some people don't like making lists because it is very complicated and needs a lot of money and time.

The verb 'like' should be followed by the gerund form 'making' when expressing preference. Also, 'list' should be plural 'lists' to match the context. 'Need' should be 'needs' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. 'Much of money and times' is incorrect; it should be 'a lot of money and time' for correct quantifier and uncountable noun usage.

× Well, I think that some people don't like make list because that is that is very complicated and need much of money and much of money and times.

✓ Well, I think that some people don't like making lists because it is very complicated and needs a lot of money and time.

The phrase 'much of money and times' is incorrect. 'Money' is an uncountable noun and should be preceded by 'a lot of' or 'much' without 'of'. 'Times' should be singular 'time' when referring to duration. Correct quantifiers improve clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Well, I think that some people don't like make list because that is that is very complicated and need much of money and much of money and times.

✓ Well, I think that some people don't like making lists because it is very complicated and needs a lot of money and time.

The verb 'like' requires the gerund form 'making' to indicate the activity. Using the base form 'make' after 'like' is grammatically incorrect.

× Well, I think that some people don't like make list because that is that is very complicated and need much of money and much of money and times.

✓ Well, I think that some people don't like making lists because it is very complicated and needs a lot of money and time.

The verb 'need' should be 'needs' to agree with the singular subject 'it' referring to 'that' (the activity). Subject-verb agreement is essential for grammatical correctness.

× Well, I think that some people don't like make list because that is that is very complicated and need much of money and much of money and times.

✓ Well, I think that some people don't like making lists because it is very complicated and needs a lot of money and time.

The noun 'list' should be plural 'lists' to correctly refer to the general concept of multiple lists. Using singular here is incorrect in this context.

× Well, usually I don't prefer to use less in my work because I think that because I think that when you you use the less in your work that is completed and you should.

✓ Well, usually I don't prefer to use lists in my work because I think that when you use lists in your work, it is completed and you should.

The phrase 'prefer to use less' is incorrect; it should be 'prefer to use lists'. Also, 'use the less' is incorrect; 'use lists' is appropriate. The verb 'prefer' is followed by 'to' plus base verb. The sentence is also incomplete and unclear, but corrections focus on grammar issues.

× Well, usually I don't prefer to use less in my work because I think that because I think that when you you use the less in your work that is completed and you should.

✓ Well, usually I don't prefer to use lists in my work because I think that when you use lists in your work, it is completed and you should.

The word 'less' is incorrect here; the correct plural noun is 'lists'. Using the correct plural form is necessary for clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Well, usually I don't prefer to use less in my work because I think that because I think that when you you use the less in your work that is completed and you should.

✓ Well, usually I don't prefer to use lists in my work because I think that when you use lists in your work, it is completed and you should.

The sentence is fragmented and contains repetition ('because I think that because I think that') and unclear phrasing. Simplifying and restructuring the sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Well, I usually use the list in my phone because I don't forget the the list I bought the the alarm.

✓ Well, I usually use the list on my phone because I don't forget the list; I set an alarm.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect with 'phone'; 'on my phone' is correct. The phrase 'I bought the alarm' is incorrect; it should be 'I set an alarm'. Also, repeated words 'the the' should be corrected. Pronoun and preposition usage must be accurate for clarity.