列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答中有语法错误，表达不够清晰。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并避免语法错误。

範例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember what I need and saves time.

建議: 回答结构较好，但开头句子不完整，建议直接回答问题并使用连贯的句子。

範例: Yes, I always make a to-do list before starting work because it helps me organize my tasks and manage my time more effectively.

建議: 表达不够清晰，句子结构有误。建议用更准确的句子表达原因，并避免语法错误。

範例: Some people might find making lists troublesome because they prefer to do things spontaneously without planning.

建議: 回答较好，但“Unlike paperless”表达不准确，建议使用更自然的对比表达。

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's more convenient. Since I always have my phone with me, I can quickly add or check items anytime, which helps me stay organized and also saves paper.

× Yes, it isn't very difficult to make a list, but it can take me many convenience.

✓ Yes, it isn't very difficult to make a list, but it can take me much time.

这里'many convenience'用法错误，'convenience'是不可数名词，不能用'many'修饰，且语境中应表达花费时间，故改为'much time'。

× I always make A to do list before starting my work because it helps me organize my tasks and manage my time more effectively.

✓ I always make a to-do list before starting my work because it helps me organize my tasks and manage my time more effectively.

'A to do list'中，'to do list'应连字符连接为'to-do list'，且冠词'a'应小写。

× Maybe they think it's trouble. They want to do things that what they want to do.

✓ Maybe they think it's trouble. They want to do things that they want to do.

句中'that what'结构不正确，'that'和'what'不能连用，应去掉'what'，保持句子通顺。

× Unlike paperless, my phone is always with me so I can quickly add or check items whenever I need.

✓ Unlike paper, my phone is always with me so I can quickly add or check items whenever I need.

'paperless'意为无纸的，语境中应对比'paper'（纸），故应改为'Unlike paper'。