列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and could be more concise. Try to avoid redundancy by not repeating the word 'list' unnecessarily. Also, provide a clear topic sentence followed by specific examples to make your answer more natural and effective.

範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list before I go out. It usually includes groceries, household utilities, and other essential items I need.

建議: Your answer has many fillers and lacks clarity. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence and use linking words to connect your ideas. Also, avoid hesitation sounds like 'uh' and be more specific about how the list helps you.

範例: Yes, I make a to-do list every morning to organise my daily tasks. It helps me prioritise important work and ensures I don't forget any duties.

建議: Avoid using negative words like 'lazy' which may sound impolite. Also, your sentence structure is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give reasons politely and use linking words to connect your ideas clearly.

範例: Some people might avoid making lists because they feel it takes too much time, or they trust their memory to remember tasks without writing them down.

建議: Your answer is clear but can be more concise and natural. Avoid repeating similar ideas and use linking words to improve coherence. Also, use consistent pronouns to make your answer more personal.

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient and I can easily access them anytime. Unlike paper lists, which I might lose, digital lists are always with me.

× I usually make lists like groceries and utilities that I use in my house and also my essential things.

✓ I usually make lists like groceries, utilities, and other essential things that I use in my house.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'like groceries and utilities' without proper separation and clarity. Adding commas and including 'other essential things' improves clarity and correctly lists plural items.

× I make a list for my work like, uh, what things to do in my work in a day and I usually make it in, in the morning and it includes things like what to do in the 1st and what's so important work and, uh, just things like that.

✓ I make a list for my work, like what things to do during my workday, and I usually make it in the morning. It includes things like what to do first and which work is most important, and just things like that.

The phrase 'in my work in a day' is awkward; 'during my workday' is more natural. Also, 'what to do in the 1st' is unclear; 'what to do first' is correct. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correct preposition use.

× And it really works for me to remember things and important, uh, duties.

✓ And it really helps me remember important duties and tasks.

The phrase 'works for me to remember things and important duties' is awkward. Using 'helps me remember' is more appropriate. Also, 'important' should directly modify 'duties' without interruption.

× I think maybe some people don't make lists because they are so lazy and maybe they don't have enough time to make list or some people are so have a great memory to remember things that they have to do in their life and so.

✓ I think maybe some people don't make lists because they are lazy or don't have enough time to make a list, or some people have a great memory to remember the things they have to do in their life.

The original sentence has pronoun and article errors: 'make list' should be 'make a list'; 'are so have a great memory' is incorrect and should be 'have a great memory'. The sentence is corrected for pronoun and article usage and clarity.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because for me it's so convenient and easy to check whenever I want.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because, for me, it's so convenient and easy to check whenever I want.

Adding commas around 'for me' improves readability and correctly sets off the phrase as an interjection.

× And if I wrote the list in a paper, I'm not sure if I lost it or I don't find it whenever I want.

✓ And if I wrote the list on paper, I'm not sure if I would lose it or not find it whenever I want.

The preposition 'in a paper' is incorrect; it should be 'on paper'. Also, tense consistency is improved by using 'would lose' instead of 'lost' to match the conditional context.

× But if we write in the phone, we can check whenever we want.

✓ But if we write on the phone, we can check whenever we want.

The preposition 'in the phone' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'on the phone' when referring to writing or using a phone as a device.