列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer more concise and clear by avoiding filler words like 'uh' and repeated phrases. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically and provide specific reasons. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then explain why you find lists helpful, and conclude with a summary.

範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember everything I need. Moreover, it allows me to check off items as I shop, ensuring I don't forget anything important.

建議: Focus on clear sentence structure and avoid repetition. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' to explain how making lists helps you. Also, be careful with grammar and word choice to improve clarity.

範例: Yes, I make a list every day before starting work because it helps me stay organized. This way, I can prioritize tasks and make sure I never miss important deadlines.

建議: Clarify your ideas and avoid vague expressions. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' to explain reasons clearly. Also, try to use more precise vocabulary and avoid filler words.

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they find it unnecessary. For example, they have strong memory skills and can easily remember tasks without writing them down.

建議: Make sure to complete your sentences and avoid incomplete thoughts. Use linking words like 'because' and 'also' to connect ideas. Be specific about the advantages of using a phone for lists and avoid filler words.

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone rather than on paper because digital lists are less likely to get lost. Also, it's easy to update or add items whenever needed.

× Yes, I make those uh, when I go for shopping because I, I find it very convenient uh, as a terminus, the need to memorizing the things uh, also we can cross check the items uh, while shopping uh, also they show that we never, we never miss any items, which is mentioned on the list.

✓ Yes, I make those uh, when I go shopping because I find it very convenient uh, as a term, the need to memorize the things uh, also we can cross-check the items uh, while shopping uh, also they show that we never miss any items, which are mentioned on the list.

The phrase 'go for shopping' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'go shopping' (Grammar Problem Type ID:1). 'Memorizing' should be in the base form 'memorize' after 'the need to' (Grammar Problem Type ID:8). Also, 'items, which is mentioned' should be 'items, which are mentioned' to agree in number (Grammar Problem Type ID:1). These corrections ensure proper verb forms and subject-verb agreement.

× So that is the reason why I choose to make less.

✓ So that is the reason why I choose to make lists.

The word 'less' is incorrect here; the plural noun 'lists' should be used to match the context (Grammar Problem Type ID:1). 'Less' is used with uncountable nouns, but 'lists' is countable, so the plural form is appropriate.

× Yasser makes lists every day before starting my work.

✓ I make lists every day before starting my work.

The subject 'Yasser' does not match the pronoun 'my' in the sentence, causing confusion. It should be 'I make lists' to be consistent (Grammar Problem Type ID:12). Also, 'makes lists' is correct for third person singular, but since the speaker is referring to themselves, 'I make lists' is appropriate.

× Making the list really help me as it helps me to stay on track.

✓ Making the list really helps me as it helps me to stay on track.

The verb 'help' should be in the third person singular form 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'Making the list' (Grammar Problem Type ID:2). This ensures subject-verb agreement.

× Also it has me has me to to ensure that all the insured to prioritize the work and never miss important deadline.

✓ Also, it helps me to ensure that I prioritize the work and never miss important deadlines.

The phrase 'it has me has me to to ensure' is incorrect and redundant. The correct expression is 'it helps me to ensure'. Also, 'all the insured to prioritize' is unclear and likely a mishearing; it should be 'I prioritize'. 'Deadline' should be plural 'deadlines' to match the context (Grammar Problem Type ID:12 and 1). These corrections clarify meaning and fix pronoun and plural usage.

× Some people don't like making this because they are not actual of such activities.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because they are not accustomed to such activities.

The word 'this' is incorrect; it should be 'lists' to refer to the activity. 'Actual of' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'accustomed to' (Grammar Problem Type ID:12 and 11). These corrections improve clarity and correct preposition use.

× The other main reason can be, uh, they have good, uh, cognitive skills.

✓ Another main reason can be that they have good cognitive skills.

The phrase 'The other main reason can be, uh, they have' is awkward; it should be 'Another main reason can be that they have' to properly connect the clause (Grammar Problem Type ID:26). This improves sentence structure.

× They can easily memorize, uh, memorize, memorize and I think, uh, that is the other reason.

✓ They can easily memorize, and I think that is another reason.

Repetition of 'memorize' is unnecessary and should be removed for clarity. 'That is the other reason' can be improved to 'that is another reason' for naturalness (Grammar Problem Type ID:26). This enhances sentence clarity and flow.

× Prefer to make her less sure on a phone rather than making on paper, because there are less chances of getting lost uh when it is made on phone uh.

✓ I prefer to make my lists on a phone rather than on paper because there are fewer chances of losing them when they are made on a phone.

The phrase 'Prefer to make her less sure' is incorrect; it should be 'I prefer to make my lists' (Grammar Problem Type ID:12). 'Less chances' should be 'fewer chances' because 'chances' is countable (Grammar Problem Type ID:14). 'Getting lost' is better expressed as 'losing them' referring to lists. Also, 'made on phone' should be 'made on a phone' for correct article use (Grammar Problem Type ID:17). These corrections fix pronoun, quantifier, and article errors.

× Also, we can easily, uh, update the information on our list easily with the help of.

✓ Also, we can easily update the information on our list with the help of technology.

The sentence is incomplete; it needs an object after 'with the help of'. Adding 'technology' completes the thought. Repetition of 'easily' is unnecessary and one instance is sufficient (Grammar Problem Type ID:26). This correction completes the sentence and improves clarity.