列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by avoiding redundancy and grammatical errors. Use linking words properly and keep your sentences concise. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then add supporting details with linking words like 'however' or 'on the other hand'.

範例: I don't usually make a list when buying small items; however, for larger or more complicated grocery shopping, I find making a list essential to stay organized.

建議: Your answer is generally good but incomplete at the end. Try to finish your sentences fully and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, avoid abrupt endings and provide a complete example.

範例: When I write academic papers, I don't make simple lists; instead, I create a detailed framework. This helps me organize my ideas logically and cover all important points, such as the introduction, main arguments, methodology, and conclusion.

建議: Improve your grammar and vocabulary by using correct expressions and more natural phrases. Also, explain your reasons more clearly and avoid vague words. Use linking words to connect your points.

範例: Some people dislike making lists for two main reasons: firstly, they may feel lazy to write them down; secondly, they might be afraid that having a list will encourage them to spend more money than planned.

建議: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to express your preference clearly and support it with reasons. Use proper sentence structure and avoid unfinished sentences.

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient and easy to edit. However, some people like writing on paper because it helps them remember better and feel more connected to their tasks.

× Well, it actually depends when I'm going to buy thing little things.

✓ Well, it actually depends when I'm going to buy little things.

The word 'thing' is singular but should be plural 'things' to match 'little things'. This is a singular and plural issue (ID 1). To improve, ensure that countable nouns agree in number with their modifiers.

× So list did not make any sense, right?

✓ So the list does not make any sense, right?

The sentence lacks the definite article 'the' before 'list' and uses past tense 'did not' which is inconsistent with the present context. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26). Correcting the article and tense improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× But when it comes to on the other hand, when it comes to buying more things and complicated groceries, the list is imperative for sure.

✓ But on the other hand, when it comes to buying more things and complicated groceries, the list is imperative for sure.

The phrase 'when it comes to on the other hand' is incorrect; 'on the other hand' should stand alone as a transition. This is an incorrect use of prepositions (ID 11). Removing 'when it comes to' before 'on the other hand' corrects the sentence.

× So list did not make any sense, right?

✓ So the list does not make any sense, right?

The noun 'list' requires the definite article 'the' to specify which list is being referred to. This is an article error (ID 22). Adding 'the' clarifies the meaning.

× Instead, I create a framework.

✓ Instead, I create a framework.

This sentence is correct and requires no correction.

× For instance, it allows me to plan the introduction, main arguments, methodology, and.

✓ For instance, it allows me to plan the introduction, main arguments, methodology, and conclusion.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'and' without completing the list, which is a sentence structure error (ID 26). Adding 'conclusion' completes the list and improves clarity.

× The second one is to afraid to spend more or much money.

✓ The second one is being afraid to spend more or much money.

The phrase 'to afraid' is incorrect; the correct form is 'being afraid'. This is an incorrect use of prepositions (ID 11). Using the gerund 'being' correctly expresses the state of fear.

× You know, when it comes to technology, doing lists on phones is more convenient, right?

✓ You know, when it comes to technology, making lists on phones is more convenient, right?

The verb 'doing lists' is awkward; 'making lists' is the correct collocation. This is an incorrect use of prepositions or verb collocation (ID 11). Using 'making' improves naturalness.

× But when it comes to paper and physically, you write the things you want to buy.

✓ But when it comes to paper and physically writing, you write the things you want to buy.

The phrase 'and physically' is misplaced and causes confusion. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26). Rephrasing to 'and physically writing' clarifies the meaning.

× So I think that doing that physically in paper makes you don't want.

✓ So I think that doing that physically on paper makes you not want to buy unnecessary things.

The sentence is incomplete and ungrammatical, ending with 'makes you don't want.' This is a sentence structure error (ID 26). Completing the sentence and correcting the negative form improves clarity and grammar.