列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to make your answer more natural and avoid repetition. Instead of repeating 'grocery' multiple times, use synonyms or rephrase. Also, add linking words to make your answer more coherent.

範例: Yes, I usually prepare a shopping list before going to the market. This helps me remember all the items I need to buy for the house, making the shopping trip more efficient.

建議: Improve clarity and grammar by avoiding repetition and awkward phrasing. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and be more specific about how the list helps your work.

範例: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized. As a result, I can complete tasks more quickly and clearly understand my priorities.

建議: Avoid negative generalizations and be more specific. Use better vocabulary and linking words to explain reasons clearly and politely.

範例: Some people avoid making lists because they find it boring or prefer a more spontaneous approach. Additionally, they might feel that lists limit their flexibility.

建議: Your answer is clear but can be improved by using more formal language and linking words. Also, avoid informal phrases like 'gonna'.

範例: I prefer making lists on paper because using my phone often distracts me. Moreover, placing the list on a wall helps me remember my tasks throughout the day.

× Yes, I usually make a list for grocery and I go to the market to get some groceries.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list for groceries and I go to the market to get some groceries.

The word 'grocery' is singular and usually refers to a store or a category, but here it should be plural 'groceries' to refer to items bought at the market. Use plural form when talking about multiple items.

× I use the list that I make to get the grocery for the house.

✓ I use the list that I make to get the groceries for the house.

Same as above, 'grocery' should be plural 'groceries' because it refers to multiple items bought for the house.

× Yes, I make a list for my work and yes, it's it usually works all the time.

✓ Yes, I make a list for my work and yes, it usually works all the time.

The phrase 'it's it' is redundant and incorrect. 'It usually works' is the correct form. Also, 'works' agrees with the singular subject 'it'.

× In fact, when you organize and make a list, it makes it easier and quicker to understand what you're doing and looking forward for the work that you do.

✓ In fact, when you organize and make a list, it makes it easier and quicker to understand what you're doing and look forward to the work that you do.

The phrase 'looking forward for' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'look forward to' followed by the object. Also, parallel verb forms should be used: 'understand' and 'look forward'.

× Some people don't like making list because they don't like to be organized or they are lazy or sort of like that.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because they don't like to be organized or they are lazy or sort of like that.

'List' should be plural 'lists' because it refers to the general activity of making multiple lists, not just one.

× But most people don't like to make a list because it's boring and they are irresponsible.

✓ But most people don't like to make lists because it's boring and they are irresponsible.

Same as above, 'a list' should be plural 'lists' to refer to the general activity.

× I prefer to make it on paper because if I make it on my phone, I will usually be distracted from my list.

✓ I prefer to make it on paper because if I make it on my phone, I will usually be distracted by my list.

The correct preposition after 'distracted' is 'by' not 'from'. 'Distracted by' indicates the cause of distraction.

× But if I make it in paper, I just put it in a wall that I can see it every day, everywhere, and I remember what I'm gonna do.

✓ But if I make it on paper, I just put it on a wall where I can see it every day, everywhere, and I remember what I'm going to do.

The correct preposition with 'paper' is 'on paper', not 'in paper'. Also, 'put it on a wall' is correct, not 'in a wall'. 'Where' is better than 'that' for referring to a place. 'Gonna' is informal; 'going to' is preferred in formal speech.