列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Ваш ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и не совсем естественен. Следует избегать лишних слов и использовать связующие слова для логичности. Также стоит улучшить структуру предложения и использовать более подходящую лексику.

範例: No, I usually don't make a shopping list because I have a good memory. For instance, when I go shopping, I can easily remember all the items I need to buy.

建議: Ответ содержит ошибки в грамматике и структуре, а также не использует связующие слова для плавности. Рекомендуется строить предложения более естественно и добавлять детали с помощью связок.

範例: I don't make a list for my work because I have a good memory. However, I usually keep notes in my book to remind myself of important tasks.

建議: Ответ слишком длинный и содержит грамматические ошибки. Следует использовать связующие слова для логичности и избегать повторов. Также стоит сделать ответ более конкретным и структурированным.

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they believe they can remember everything. Also, they might find list-making difficult or boring.

建議: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и неестественные выражения. Рекомендуется использовать правильные формы глаголов и более связные предложения, а также объяснять предпочтения более подробно.

範例: I don't prefer making lists on my phone because I find it boring. Instead, I prefer to remember everything I need without writing it down.

× No, I don't usually make a A list shopping because I have a good memory.

✓ No, I don't usually make a list when shopping because I have a good memory.

The article 'a' should not be capitalized and the phrase 'a list shopping' is incorrect. It should be 'a list when shopping' to correctly express the activity. Articles must be used properly before nouns, and the phrase structure should be correct.

× For example, when I go to shopping I remember everything I need to buy in the shop.

✓ For example, when I go shopping I remember everything I need to buy in the shop.

The phrase 'go to shopping' is incorrect. The correct form is 'go shopping' without the preposition 'to'. This is a common error with verb + activity expressions.

× I don't make a list for my work because I have a good memory and I can easily remember I need to do in my book.

✓ I don't make a list for my work because I have a good memory and I can easily remember what I need to do in my book.

The sentence is missing the relative pronoun 'what' to introduce the object of 'remember'. Without it, the sentence is incomplete and unclear.

× I think that some people don't like making this because they think that they are remember everything that they need to do and maybe it is very difficult to make a list and it is not interesting for people.

✓ I think that some people don't like making lists because they think that they remember everything they need to do and maybe it is very difficult to make a list and it is not interesting for people.

The pronoun 'this' is incorrect here; it should be 'lists' to refer to the activity. Also, 'they are remember' is incorrect; it should be 'they remember' (present simple). The sentence needed correction for pronoun use and verb form.

× I don't prefer making lists on my phone because it is very boring and not interesting for me.

✓ I don't prefer making lists on my phone because it is very boring and not interesting to me.

The phrase 'not interesting for me' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'to' in this context: 'not interesting to me'. This is a common preposition usage error.

× I prefer remember everything what I want.

✓ I prefer to remember everything I want.

The verb 'prefer' should be followed by the infinitive form 'to remember', not the bare verb 'remember'. Also, 'what I want' is better expressed as 'everything I want' without 'what'. This corrects verb form and pronoun usage.