列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to use clearer and more natural English expressions. For example, instead of 'insurance essential things', say 'important items'. Also, ensure subject-verb agreement and avoid redundancy. Keep your answer concise and directly related to the question.

範例: Yes, I always make a list of important items before going shopping. This helps me avoid forgetting anything and saves time by keeping me organized.

建議: Focus on clarity and grammar. Use correct tenses and sentence structures. Instead of repeating phrases, provide clear reasons and link your ideas logically. For example, explain how scheduling helps your revision and improves your grades.

範例: Yes, I make a schedule for all my subjects about a month before exams. This helps me revise effectively and improves my grades.

建議: Avoid repeating phrases and improve sentence flow by using linking words. Also, clarify your points with specific reasons. For example, explain why some people find list-making time-consuming and how that affects them.

範例: Some people avoid making lists because they think it takes too much time and effort. They trust their memory, but sometimes they forget important tasks and feel regretful later.

建議: Work on sentence structure and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, explain why using a phone is more convenient and how reminders help you stay organized.

範例: I prefer making lists on my mobile phone because I always carry it with me. It is more convenient and reliable than paper, and the reminders help me stay organized.

× Before going to the shop, I always write down the insurance essential things that I need to purchase.

✓ Before going to the shop, I always write down the essential things that I need to purchase.

The phrase 'insurance essential things' is incorrect; 'insurance' is unnecessary here and causes confusion. The correct phrase is 'essential things'. This is a vocabulary misuse rather than a grammar error, but it affects sentence clarity.

× It reduce the amount of forgetting and helps me to organize the things well and reduce my time value.

✓ It reduces the amount of forgetting, helps me to organize things well, and reduces the time I spend.

The subject 'It' is singular, so the verb should be 'reduces' not 'reduce'. Also, parallel structure requires all verbs to be in the same form. 'Reduce my time value' is unclear; 'reduces the time I spend' is clearer.

× Before the before a month of exams, I always scheduled a list of my all subject to the dates.

✓ Before a month of exams, I always schedule a list of all my subjects with the dates.

The phrase 'Before the before a month' is redundant and incorrect. Also, 'scheduled' is past tense but 'always' suggests a habitual action, so present tense 'schedule' is appropriate. 'My all subject' should be 'all my subjects' for correct word order and plural form.

× I always scheduled a list of my all subject to the dates.

✓ I always schedule a list of all my subjects with the dates.

The preposition 'to' is incorrect here; 'with' is the correct preposition to associate subjects with dates. Also, 'my all subject' is incorrect word order; it should be 'all my subjects'.

× It helps me to revision.

✓ It helps me to revise.

'Revision' is a noun; the verb form 'revise' should be used after 'helps me to'. Using the noun here is incorrect.

× It abilities, it abilities it enhances the ability of my grades.

✓ It enhances my abilities and improves my grades.

The phrase 'It abilities, it abilities' is incorrect and repetitive. 'Enhances the ability of my grades' is awkward; 'improves my grades' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× Some people think that the list is making a list is a lot of time and effort.

✓ Some people think that making a list takes a lot of time and effort.

The original sentence is confusing and redundant. 'The list is making a list' is incorrect. The correct structure is 'making a list takes a lot of time and effort'.

× They believe that they have enough memory to do work.

✓ They believe that they have enough memory to do the work.

The phrase 'to do work' is vague; 'to do the work' is more specific and appropriate here.

× Later on when they forget something, they feel regret.

✓ Later on, when they forget something, they feel regret.

A comma is needed after 'Later on' for correct sentence structure. 'Feel regret' is acceptable but 'regret it' or 'regret it later' would be more natural.

× I prefer to make a list on mobile phone because I always carry the mobile phone with me because the list on making mobile phone is more convenient and reliable than than using the paper and mobile phones.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my mobile phone because I always carry it with me. Making a list on the mobile phone is more convenient and reliable than using paper lists.

The sentence is repetitive and awkward. 'The list on making mobile phone' is incorrect; it should be 'making a list on the mobile phone'. Also, 'than than' is a typo. Pronouns should be used to avoid repetition.

× I update my mobile phone daily so it give me the reminder of the list to remind me.

✓ I update my mobile phone daily so it gives me reminders of the list to remind me.

The verb 'give' should be 'gives' to agree with singular subject 'it'. 'The reminder of the list' is awkward; 'reminders of the list' is clearer.