列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中语法错误较多，如"I'm the person who don't have good memories"应为"I am a person who doesn't have a good memory"。建议注意主谓一致和冠词使用，且回答稍显冗长，可以更简洁自然。

範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because I tend to forget things easily. This helps me remember all the items I need to buy and saves time.

建議: 回答不够连贯，表达不清晰，存在语法错误和不完整句子。建议使用完整句子并用连接词使回答更流畅。

範例: Yes, I always make a to-do list for work. First, I prioritize the most important tasks, and then I estimate how much time I need to complete each one.

建議: 表达不清晰且有语法错误，如"the person who not willing to make this"应为"people who are not willing to make lists"。建议简化句子结构，表达更明确。

範例: I think some people don't like making lists because they believe they can remember everything without writing it down, and they trust their memory.

建議: 回答基本清晰，但时态使用不准确，如"I prefer"应与过去时态一致。建议注意时态一致性，并使用更自然的表达。

範例: I used to prefer making lists on paper because it felt more secure, but now I prefer using my phone since it's more convenient to carry around.

× Well, absolutely yes, because I'm the person who don't have good memories.

✓ Well, absolutely yes, because I'm the person who doesn't have good memories.

这里的主语是单数的"person"，所以关系代词引导的从句中动词应使用第三人称单数形式"doesn't"，而不是复数形式"don't"。

× I must still make a list so when I go to shop so that I can buy most things that I need.

✓ I must still make a list when I go shopping so that I can buy most of the things that I need.

"go to shop"应改为"go shopping"，因为"go shopping"是固定搭配，表示去购物。"most things"前应加介词"of"，构成"most of the things"，表示大部分东西。

× For example, initially, what's the most important things to do?

✓ For example, initially, what's the most important thing to do?

"what's"是"what is"的缩写，后面应接单数名词，因此"things"应改为单数形式"thing"。

× Secondly, how much did I? How much did I need? Need to finish it?

✓ Secondly, how much do I need to finish?

原句结构混乱，时态和语序不正确。应使用一般现在时"do I need"，并将句子合并为完整疑问句。

× Well, from my perspective, the person who not willing to make this is that they can remember all the things in their mind and they were magic magic to practice it.

✓ Well, from my perspective, the people who are not willing to make lists can remember all the things in their mind and they have a magical way to practice it.

"the person who not willing"缺少动词"is"，应为"who are not willing"，且前面应使用复数"people"。"they were magic magic to practice it"表达不清，改为"they have a magical way to practice it"更通顺。

× In the past, I prefer to make the list in the paper because it can bring me more security, but now I prefer to list in my phone because it is convenient for me to take it everywhere.

✓ In the past, I preferred to make the list on paper because it gave me more security, but now I prefer to make the list on my phone because it is convenient for me to take it everywhere.

"prefer"时态应与时间状语一致，过去时用"preferred"。"in the paper"应改为"on paper"，"list in my phone"应改为"make the list on my phone"，介词使用错误。