列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答表达了基本意思，但有语法错误和用词不当，如“which is totally waste my money”应为“which totally wastes my money”。建议注意语法时态和词汇搭配，避免冗余表达。

範例: Yes, I always make a list before going to the supermarket. It helps me remember what I really need and prevents me from buying unnecessary items, which saves my money.

建議: 回答中存在语法混乱和表达不清，如“definitely no”与前文矛盾，且句子结构不完整。建议简洁明了地回答问题，注意时态和主谓一致。

範例: Yes, I always make lists for my work. They help me understand my tasks and remind me of deadlines, so they definitely work for me.

建議: 回答中有重复和不连贯的表达，如“making less to make them feel restricted”不够清晰。建议使用更准确的词汇和连词，使表达更自然流畅。

範例: Well, some people prefer to go with the flow because making lists can make them feel restricted or uncomfortable. They might not like planning and therefore don't worry about missing deadlines.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和表达不自然，如“Definitely no”用法不当，且句子结构不完整。建议使用完整句子，注意冠词和动词形式。

範例: I prefer to make lists on paper rather than on my phone. Phones are a big distraction because I often end up surfing the internet instead of checking my lists.

× The list helps me to understand and remember what I really need and prevent me from buying a lot of unnecessary items and stuff which is totally waste my money.

✓ The list helps me to understand and remember what I really need and prevent me from buying a lot of unnecessary items and stuff which totally waste my money.

这里的主语是复数（items and stuff），所以谓语动词应该用复数形式waste，而不是单数形式wastes。

× The list helps me to understand and remember what I really need and prevent me from buying a lot of unnecessary items and stuff which is totally waste my money.

✓ The list helps me to understand and remember what I really need and prevent me from buying a lot of unnecessary items and stuff which totally wastes my money.

这里的关系代词which指代单数的stuff，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式wastes。

× Lists are essential to my daily routine and accomplish my daily work in Make a list helps me to understand and warm me the deadline of each tasks and it definitely work for me.

✓ Lists are essential to my daily routine and help me accomplish my daily work. Making a list helps me to understand and warn me of the deadline of each task and it definitely works for me.

tasks是复数，前面用each时应使用单数task；动词warn拼写错误，应为warn；动词work应使用第三人称单数works；句子结构混乱，需拆分为两句。

× Making a list helps me to understand and warm me the deadline of each tasks and it definitely work for me.

✓ Making a list helps me to understand and warn me of the deadline of each task and it definitely works for me.

动词warn后应接介词of表示“提醒……”，而不是直接接宾语。

× it definitely work for me.

✓ it definitely works for me.

主语it是第三人称单数，谓语动词work应加s变为works。

× Well, some people, they just go with flow, you know, making less to make them feel restricted or, you know, uncomfortable.

✓ Well, some people just go with the flow, you know, making less to avoid feeling restricted or, you know, uncomfortable.

短语go with flow缺少定冠词the，应为go with the flow；making less后面表达不完整，改为making less to avoid feeling更通顺。

× I prefer to make a list on a paper instead of phone.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper instead of on my phone.

介词on后面不加不定冠词a；phone前应加介词on和物主代词my，表示“在我的手机上”。

× Definitely no.

✓ Definitely not.

这里用来否定，应使用副词not而不是no。

× Phones are huge distraction. I know phone distract me from getting work attentively and whenever I tap the phone I just surf the Internet instead of, you know, go through my lists.

✓ Phones are a huge distraction. I know phones distract me from working attentively and whenever I tap my phone, I just surf the Internet instead of, you know, going through my lists.

distraction前应加不定冠词a；phone应统一复数形式phones；distract后应接宾格代词me；get work attentively表达不当，改为working attentively；tap the phone改为tap my phone更自然；go through my lists应使用动名词形式going。