列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中时态使用不准确，且句子结构不够自然。建议使用简单现在时描述习惯行为，避免冗余表达，并注意语法正确。

範例: I usually make a shopping list when I plan to buy something specific. However, sometimes I just go to the shop to browse without a list.

建議: 回答不够清晰，逻辑不连贯，且时态混乱。建议直接回答问题，使用连贯的句子，并用连接词使表达更流畅。

範例: I don't usually make a list for my work now. But when I was in high school, I followed a specific order to complete my tasks, which helped me stay organized.

建議: 回答中出现了非英语内容，表达不够准确。建议用英语完整表达观点，避免重复，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they see it as extra work. They may also believe that lists do not help them work faster.

建議: 表达中有语法错误和重复，建议简化句子结构，使用更准确的词汇，并保持逻辑连贯。

範例: I prefer making lists on paper because I lack self-discipline. If I use my phone, I might get distracted and start playing games.

× So sometimes if I don't want to buy anything, I went to the shop just for fun and looking for something I would like.

✓ So sometimes if I don't want to buy anything, I go to the shop just for fun and look for something I would like.

这里的时间是现在时态，表示习惯性动作，不能用过去时went，应该用一般现在时go。同时，looking应改为look以保持时态一致。

× So sometimes if I don't want to buy anything, I went to the shop just for fun and looking for something I would like.

✓ So sometimes if I don't want to buy anything, I go to the shop just for fun and look for something I would like.

并列动词时，第二个动词应与第一个动词时态一致，不能用动名词形式looking，应改为动词原形look。

× So if I want to shopping today I will make a list.

✓ So if I want to shop today, I will make a list.

动词want后应接动词原形，不能接动名词形式shopping，应改为shop。

× Not really, because when I was a Senior High School student I have a certain order to do my work and I think it works.

✓ Not really, because when I was a Senior High School student I had a certain order to do my work and I think it worked.

句子描述过去的情况，动词have和think应使用过去时had和thought以保持时态一致。

× So then if I wish.

✓ So then if I wish to, I will.

原句不完整，缺少谓语和宾语，导致句子结构错误，应补充完整表达。

× So some people they didn't like making lists.

✓ So some people don't like making lists.

句中出现重复主语some people和they，造成冗余，应去掉其中一个。且根据上下文时态应使用一般现在时。

× I prefer to make a list on paper because I don't have a very much self-discipline.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because I don't have much self-discipline.

self-discipline是不可数名词，前面不应加very much，应直接用much。

× So if I take my photo, my phone up, I will start to play.

✓ So if I take my phone up, I will start to play.

这里的my photo应为my phone，且逗号位置错误，导致句子不通顺。

× So if I take my photo, my phone up, I will start to play.

✓ So if I take my phone up, I will start to play.

逗号使用错误，导致句子断裂，应去掉逗号使句子连贯。

× So I don't think I can control myself from playing my phone.

✓ So I don't think I can control myself from playing on my phone.

play后应加介词on表示在手机上玩，缺少介词导致表达不完整。