列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答が不自然で文法的な誤りが多いです。例えば、「make a shop every going shopping」は意味が通じません。より自然な表現にするために、シンプルで正確な文を心がけ、冗長な表現を避けましょう。

範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because I tend to forget important items. It helps me remember what to buy and where to go.

建議: 文法の誤りと繰り返しが目立ちます。過去形と現在形の混同や「such as important meeting and such as important classes」の繰り返しを避け、より具体的で簡潔な説明を心がけましょう。

範例: Yes, I make a list for work because I have many tasks. It helps me remember important meetings and classes.

建議: 文が不明瞭で意味が伝わりにくいです。理由を明確にし、論理的に説明するために、簡潔で正しい文法を使いましょう。

範例: Some people dislike making lists because they find it troublesome and prefer to do things spontaneously without planning.

建議: 表現が不自然で繰り返しが多いです。「watch it, watch them」などの表現は適切ではありません。より自然な表現と具体的な例を使い、簡潔に答えましょう。

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient. For example, I can check my list anytime and anywhere, even when I travel abroad.

× Yes, I make a shop every going shopping because I tend to forget important things every day so I always make a list for about what to what to buy or where to go.

✓ Yes, I make a list every time I go shopping because I tend to forget important things every day, so I always make a list about what to buy and where to go.

The phrase 'every going shopping' is incorrect; it should be 'every time I go shopping' to express habitual action. Also, 'make a shop' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'make a list'. The sentence structure was confusing and needed rephrasing for clarity.

× I make a list when I have to work because I had a lot of things to do every time.

✓ I make a list when I have to work because I have a lot of things to do every time.

The use of past tense 'had' is incorrect here because the sentence refers to a habitual present action. The correct tense is present 'have' to match 'make' and 'have to work'.

× This helps me to remember important things such as important meeting and such as important classes.

✓ This helps me to remember important things such as important meetings and important classes.

The phrase 'such as important meeting' is incorrect because 'meeting' should be plural 'meetings' to match the context. Also, 'such as' is repeated unnecessarily; it should be used once before listing examples.

× Some people do not like making a list because they find it troublesome to make list as this be as they can do things without list so they dislike making lists.

✓ Some people do not like making lists because they find it troublesome to make lists as they can do things without a list, so they dislike making lists.

The article 'a' is missing before 'list' in some places. Also, 'this be as' is incorrect and should be removed for clarity. The plural form 'lists' is more appropriate when speaking generally.

× I feel for making a list of phone because it is convenient.

✓ I prefer making a list on my phone because it is convenient.

The phrase 'feel for making a list of phone' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'prefer making a list on my phone'. The preposition 'on' is used with devices, and 'prefer' fits the context better than 'feel'.

× For example, if I make a list on phone, I can watch it, watch them every time, everywhere.

✓ For example, if I make a list on my phone, I can check it anytime, anywhere.

The pronoun 'it' refers to 'list' which is singular, so 'watch them' is incorrect. Also, 'watch' is not the appropriate verb here; 'check' or 'look at' is better. 'Anytime, anywhere' is a more natural expression than 'every time, everywhere'.

× For example, when I go abroad I can watch list which I made.

✓ For example, when I go abroad, I can check the list that I made.

The phrase 'watch list' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'check' or 'look at'. Also, 'which I made' should be 'that I made' for defining relative clause. A comma is needed after 'abroad' for clarity.