列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp, làm cho ý không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản và rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và dùng liên từ hợp lý để câu mạch lạc hơn.

範例: Yes, I always make a list before shopping because it helps me save time and ensures I don't forget anything important.

建議: Bạn trả lời khá rõ ràng nhưng câu cuối hơi đơn giản và có lỗi nhỏ về từ vựng (exercise thay vì assignments). Hãy dùng từ chính xác và thêm liên từ để câu tự nhiên hơn.

範例: Yes, I usually make a list for my work because I study nearly 10 subjects, so I have many assignments. Therefore, making a list helps me complete all my tasks on time.

建議: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu lặp lại, làm giảm tính tự nhiên. Bạn nên chia câu rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và dùng liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn.

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they trust their memory. However, I am not good at remembering things, so I prefer to make lists to stay organized.

建議: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi phát âm và từ vựng không chính xác (megalis không phải từ đúng). Câu cũng dài và thiếu liên kết mạch lạc. Bạn nên dùng từ đúng, câu ngắn gọn và dùng liên từ để câu rõ ràng hơn.

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is portable and always with me. This way, I can easily check my list whenever I forget something.

× Yes, I do make a list before I go shopping because I think there are when we make a list before we go shopping will not waste so much time and we don't forget what we need to do, what we need to buy.

✓ Yes, I do make a list before I go shopping because I think that when we make a list before we go shopping, we will not waste so much time and we won't forget what we need to do or buy.

The original sentence has a confusing structure and missing conjunctions, making it hard to understand. Adding 'that' after 'think' and restructuring the sentence clarifies the meaning and improves grammatical correctness.

× I usually make a list for my work because I study nearly 10 subjects so there are many assignments for me.

✓ I usually make a list for my work because I study nearly 10 subjects, so there are many assignments for me.

A comma is needed before 'so' to separate the two independent clauses. The plural 'assignments' is correct here because it refers to multiple tasks.

× Therefore, I need to make a list to finish all my exercise.

✓ Therefore, I need to make a list to finish all my exercises.

The word 'exercise' should be plural 'exercises' because it refers to multiple assignments or tasks.

× I think that because they are confident with their memory, I'm not good at memorizing things, so I need to make a list.

✓ I think that some people are confident in their memory, but I'm not good at memorizing things, so I need to make a list.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'that because they are' which is unclear. Replacing it with 'some people are' clarifies the subject. Also, 'confident with' should be 'confident in' for correct preposition use.

× But maybe some people they are, they can do anything without list, they can finish in one day, so they don't need to make a list.

✓ But maybe some people can do anything without a list; they can finish everything in one day, so they don't need to make a list.

The original sentence has redundant pronouns and missing articles. Removing 'they are' and adding 'a' before 'list' improves clarity and correctness.

× I'd rather megalis on my phone than paper because the phone is portable so I can bring it myself anytime and when I need it always available.

✓ I'd rather make a list on my phone than on paper because the phone is portable, so I can bring it with me anytime, and it is always available when I need it.

The word 'megalis' is a typo and should be 'make a list'. Also, 'bring it myself' is incorrect; it should be 'bring it with me'. Adding 'on' before 'paper' is necessary for parallel structure.

× So like when I forget something I can take it out and see oh I need to do this thing.

✓ So, when I forget something, I can take out my list and see, 'Oh, I need to do this.'

The original sentence lacks punctuation and clarity. Adding commas and quotation marks improves readability and expresses the idea more clearly.