列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and clear. Instead of saying "schedule it beforehand," you might say "plan my shopping in advance." Also, try to avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

範例: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop, but I plan what I need to buy in advance to save time.

建議: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Instead of "make my mind clearly" and "do things in a row," try "clear my mind" and "complete tasks in order." Also, add linking words to improve coherence.

範例: Yes, I usually make a list when I work because it helps clear my mind and allows me to complete tasks in order efficiently.

建議: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and unclear. Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid repeating words. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically. For example, explain that some people prefer spontaneity and find list-making unnecessary because they are not very organized.

範例: I think some people dislike making lists because they prefer to act spontaneously and find it unnecessary, especially if they are not very organized.

建議: Your answer is good but could be more concise and natural. Avoid repeating words and improve sentence structure. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

範例: It depends; if I don't have my phone, I write a list on paper. However, when I have my phone, I prefer to use it because it's safer and more convenient, although writing on paper feels more formal.

× No, I don't do a list when I'm shopping, but I will schedule it beforehand.

✓ No, I don't make a list when I'm shopping, but I will schedule it beforehand.

The verb 'do' is incorrectly used with 'a list'. The correct verb collocation is 'make a list'. 'Make' is the appropriate verb to use when referring to creating a list.

× Yeah, I would do a list when I'm working because I think it will make my mind clearly and to do things in a row.

✓ Yeah, I would make a list when I'm working because I think it will make my mind clear and help me do things in order.

Again, 'do a list' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'make a list'. Also, 'make my mind clearly' is incorrect; the adjective 'clear' should be used instead of the adverb 'clearly' after 'make my mind'. Additionally, 'to do things in a row' is awkward; 'help me do things in order' is clearer and more natural.

× I guess maybe they're maybe they think it is too difficult to make a list because they just want to do something in their mind, like do it immediately. Not not a organized person.

✓ I guess maybe they think it is too difficult to make a list because they just want to do something in their mind, like do it immediately. They are not an organized person.

The sentence has redundant words ('maybe they're maybe they') which should be simplified. Also, 'Not not a organized person' is grammatically incorrect; it should be 'They are not an organized person' to form a complete sentence with correct article usage.

× It depends, Like if I don't have my cell phone with me I would do a list in paper.

✓ It depends. Like, if I don't have my cell phone with me, I would make a list on paper.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect when referring to paper; the correct preposition is 'on' for 'on paper'. Also, 'do a list' should be 'make a list'. Additionally, punctuation and capitalization are improved for clarity.

× But if I had my phones with me I would do it on my phone because it is safer and it is more convenient, but in the paper it would make me make it more formal.

✓ But if I have my phone with me, I would do it on my phone because it is safer and more convenient, but on paper it would make me make it more formal.

The conditional sentence is mixed incorrectly; 'If I had' suggests past subjunctive, but the context is present/future, so 'If I have' is correct. 'Phones' should be singular 'phone' to match the context. Also, 'in the paper' should be 'on paper' as the correct preposition. 'Do a list' corrected to 'make a list' is implied here as well.