列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答较为简单，表达不够自然，且句子结构有些生硬。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并且避免重复表达“make it clear”。

範例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember exactly what I need to buy and saves me time.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，句子结构混乱。建议简化句子，使用连贯的表达，并注意时态和冠词的使用。

範例: Yes, I always make a to-do list when I have deadlines because it helps me stay organized and manage my time better.

建議: 回答内容不清晰，表达混乱，词汇使用不当。建议明确表达观点，使用恰当的词汇，并给出具体原因。

範例: I think some people dislike making lists because they feel restricted and stressed by having to follow a strict plan.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和拼写错误，表达不够流畅。建议注意动词形式和拼写，简化句子结构，使表达更自然。

範例: Definitely, I prefer making lists on my phone because I usually don't carry paper with me, and it's easy to lose paper before I can check it.

× Yes I do well I always make a list in during my final due because it makes my life more organized and make my timetable more clear.

✓ Yes, I do. Well, I always make a list during my final due because it makes my life more organized and makes my timetable clearer.

句中“make”应与主语“it”保持一致，使用第三人称单数形式“makes”。此外，“in during”是错误的介词搭配，应去掉“in”。“more clear”应改为比较级“clearer”。

× Yes I do well I always make a list in during my final due because it makes my life more organized and make my timetable more clear.

✓ Yes, I do. Well, I always make a list during my final due because it makes my life more organized and makes my timetable clearer.

“in during”是错误的介词搭配，应去掉“in”，只用“during”。

× Uh, I think they may think Alice will limit their space of measuring.

✓ Uh, I think they may think a list will limit their space for measuring.

“Alice”应为“a list”，且“space of measuring”应改为“space for measuring”，介词使用错误。

× Uh, I think they may think Alice will limit their space of measuring.

✓ Uh, I think they may think a list will limit their space for measuring.

“space of measuring”中的介词“of”用法不当，应改为“for”。

× For example, I will feel some stress when I face to a organized list because I have too much.

✓ For example, I will feel some stress when I face an organized list because I have too much.

“face”后不需要介词“to”，应直接跟宾语。

× For example, I will feel some stress when I face to a organized list because I have too much.

✓ For example, I will feel some stress when I face an organized list because I have too much.

“a organized”中“organized”以元音音素开头，应使用不定冠词“an”。

× Definitely, I prefer riding at least on phone because I don't have a habit to bring a paper with me because it is really easy to lost the paper before I can put up and see it easily.

✓ Definitely, I prefer writing at least on my phone because I don't have a habit of bringing paper with me since it is really easy to lose the paper before I can put it up and see it easily.

“riding”应为“writing”，动词错误；“on phone”应为“on my phone”，缺少所有格；“a habit to bring”应为“a habit of bringing”，介词搭配错误；“lost”应为“lose”，动词形式错误；“put up”后应加宾语“it”。