列表— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Do you make a list when you shop?
考生
Sometimes I did, but mostly not. I don't know, uh, I shop, I am shopping uh, once a week and I remember all of them uh, and I think if I shopping umm, food.
考官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
考生
Sometimes, sometimes I make a work list, but usually I don't uh, because, uh, mostly I have many works for the right to the least uh, and do gradually uh.
考官
Why don't some people like making lists?
考生
Maybe reason of this is their laziness, I don't know. Umm. However, I also didn't make lists of work or something. I make it when I need some special list of products.
考官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
考生
It's very interesting question because some people prefer to make lists on the paper and someone off the phone. It depends on the person who make it because all the people maybe cannot add to phone their make list. But young people in phone prefer prefer in phone.
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Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
分數: 50.0建議: თქვენი პასუხი უნდა იყოს უფრო ბუნებრივი და სტრუქტურირებული. გამოიყენეთ დაკავშირებული სიტყვები, რათა პასუხი იყოს ლოგიკური და მკაფიო. ასევე, შეეცადეთ თავიდან აიცილოთ ზედმეტი სიტყვები და გაუმჯობესოთ გრამატიკა.
範例: I sometimes make a shopping list, but usually I don't because I shop once a week and try to remember everything I need, especially when I buy food.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
分數: 45.0建議: თქვენი პასუხი უნდა იყოს უფრო გასაგები და ორგანიზებული. გამოიყენეთ დაკავშირებული სიტყვები, რათა გაამყაროთ აზრი და თავიდან აიცილოთ გაუგებრობა.
範例: Sometimes I make a work list, but usually I don't because I have many tasks and I prefer to do them gradually from the most important to the least important.
Why don't some people like making lists?
分數: 40.0建議: თქვენი პასუხი უნდა იყოს უფრო კონკრეტული და ბუნებრივი. შეეცადეთ გამოიყენოთ უფრო მრავალფეროვანი სიტყვები და გაამყაროთ თქვენი აზრი კონკრეტული მიზეზებით.
範例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it boring or time-consuming. Personally, I only make lists when I need to buy special products.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
分數: 45.0建議: თქვენი პასუხი უნდა იყოს უფრო მკაფიო და ლოგიკური. გამოიყენეთ შესაბამისი ლექსიკა და სტრუქტურა, რათა გამოხატოთ თქვენი აზრი.
範例: I think it depends on the person. Some prefer making lists on paper, while others use their phones. Young people usually prefer using their phones because it's more convenient.
文法
× Sometimes I did, but mostly not.
✓ Sometimes I do, but mostly not.
The question is in the present tense, so the answer should also be in the present tense. Using 'did' indicates past tense, which is inconsistent here.
× I shop, I am shopping uh, once a week and I remember all of them uh, and I think if I shopping umm, food.
✓ I shop, I am shopping once a week and I remember all of them, and I think if I am shopping for food.
The phrase 'if I shopping' is missing the auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense. Also, 'for food' is needed to complete the meaning.
× mostly I have many works for the right to the least uh, and do gradually uh.
✓ mostly I have a lot of work from the most important to the least, and do it gradually.
'Works' is incorrect here; 'work' is an uncountable noun. Also, 'a lot of' is the correct quantifier for uncountable nouns. The phrase 'right to the least' is unclear and corrected to 'from the most important to the least' for clarity.
× I also didn't make lists of work or something.
✓ I also don't make lists of work or anything.
The sentence should be in the present tense to match the context. 'Didn't make' is past tense, which is inconsistent here.
× It depends on the person who make it because all the people maybe cannot add to phone their make list.
✓ It depends on the person who makes it because not everyone can add their list to the phone.
Subject-verb agreement error with 'person who make' corrected to 'person who makes'. Also, the sentence structure is improved for clarity and correct pronoun use.
× young people in phone prefer prefer in phone.
✓ young people prefer to use the phone.
The phrase 'prefer prefer in phone' is incorrect and redundant. Corrected to a clear and grammatically correct expression.
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