列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答は質問に直接答えていますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現が見られます。例えば、「like supermarkets or running some errands」は不明瞭で、「at least one I forget to get 1」は冗長で意味が伝わりにくいです。より自然で明確な表現を心がけ、文を簡潔にまとめることが重要です。

範例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before going to the supermarket because if I don't, I tend to forget some items. Making a list helps me remember everything and avoid regrets later.

建議: 回答は質問の意図に沿っていますが、文法や語彙の誤りが多く、意味が分かりにくい部分があります。例えば、「a lot of tons of homework」や「make up some list in a small MO」は不自然です。より正確な語彙を使い、文を整理して話す練習をしましょう。

範例: Although I am a student and don't have a job, I often make lists for my homework to keep track of deadlines. I find that scheduling tasks helps me manage my time effectively.

建議: 回答は少し曖昧で、話がまとまっていません。繰り返しや不必要な言葉が多く、論理的なつながりが弱いです。理由を明確にし、簡潔に話す練習をしましょう。

範例: Some people may dislike making lists because they prefer to remember tasks mentally or avoid facing how many things they need to do. Forgetting to bring a list can also be a reason.

建議: 回答は質問に答えていますが、語彙の誤用（"take less by memos"や"taking medals"）や文法の誤りがあります。より正確な表現を使い、理由を明確に述べることが大切です。

範例: I prefer making lists on paper because it motivates me to work. Using my phone can be distracting since I might open other apps.

× Yes, I often go to like supermarkets or running some errands but if I do not make a list then I would forget everything or at least one I forget to get 1.

✓ Yes, I often go to supermarkets or run some errands but if I do not make a list then I would forget everything or at least one thing I forget to get.

The phrase 'go to like supermarkets or running some errands' incorrectly mixes 'go to' with 'running'. The verb after 'or' should be in base form 'run' to parallel 'go'. Also, 'like' is unnecessary here and '1' should be 'one thing'.

× I am currently a student so I don't work but we do have these like homeworks from the school, a lot of tons of homework so so I don't forget the deadline.

✓ I am currently a student so I don't work but we do have homework from school, a lot of homework so I don't forget the deadline.

The word 'homework' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized as 'homeworks'. Also, 'a lot of tons of homework' is redundant and incorrect; 'a lot of homework' suffices.

× I make up some list in a small MO and I think that's a really important thing to schedule up.

✓ I make up some lists in a small memo and I think that's a really important thing to schedule.

The phrase 'make up some list in a small MO' is unclear; 'memo' is likely intended. Also, 'schedule up' is incorrect; 'schedule' alone is correct.

× I don't think there are people who don't like making lists, but I think like most people just forget to take the memo or they think like they can just keep it in their minds or like probably they just don't wanna see that they have a lot of things to do.

✓ I don't think there are people who don't like making lists, but I think most people just forget to take the memo or they think they can just keep it in their minds or probably they just don't want to see that they have a lot of things to do.

The repeated use of 'like' is unnecessary and informal. Also, 'wanna' should be 'want to' in formal speech.

× I definitely take less by memos or papers because I think it just gives me motivation that I have to work and like if I open my phone then I might open some other apps as well.

✓ I definitely take notes by memos or papers because I think it just gives me motivation that I have to work and if I open my phone then I might open some other apps as well.

The phrase 'take less by memos or papers' is incorrect; 'take notes' is the correct expression. 'Less' is not appropriate here.

× So I think taking medals by paper is the most good thing to start your work.

✓ So I think taking notes on paper is the best way to start your work.

'Medals' is incorrect; likely 'notes' was intended. 'Most good' is incorrect; the correct superlative is 'best'. Also, 'by paper' should be 'on paper'.