列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your response more concise and grammatically correct by directly stating the benefit of making a list and avoiding redundancy. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I always make a list before shopping because it helps me remember everything I need. This way, I avoid forgetting items and make the process simpler and more efficient.

建議: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases. Try to use correct verb tenses and clearer expressions. Also, use linking words to explain how the list helps you prioritize tasks effectively.

範例: Yes, I make a list for my work because it reminds me of my tasks and helps me organise them. For example, I can prioritise what to do first and follow up on other tasks, which makes my work more manageable.

建議: Your answer is vague and contains unclear phrases. Try to give a clearer reason with specific details and use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

範例: I think some people avoid making lists because of their past experiences or habits. For instance, if they grew up in an environment where lists were not used, they might find it unnecessary or time-consuming.

建議: Your answer is incomplete and has grammatical errors. Try to complete your thoughts clearly and use linking words to explain your preference logically.

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is easy to type and add items whenever I want. Moreover, since I always carry my phone, I can access my list anytime conveniently.

× Yes, I always make a list before I go to shop because when we made a list it is make things simpler.

✓ Yes, I always make a list before I go shopping because when we make a list it makes things simpler.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'made' (past tense) instead of 'make' (present tense) to describe a habitual action. Also, 'go to shop' should be 'go shopping' as the verb form. 'It is make' is incorrect; it should be 'it makes' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Use present tense for habitual actions and ensure subject-verb agreement.

× Yes, I always make a list before I go to shop because when we made a list it is make things simpler.

✓ Yes, I always make a list before I go shopping because when we make a list it makes things simpler.

'Go to shop' is incorrect; the correct form is 'go shopping' using the verb + -ing form to indicate the activity of shopping.

× Because it is like sometime we all not like to remember all the things what we have to brought from the market.

✓ Because sometimes we do not like to remember all the things that we have to bring from the market.

'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'Have to brought' is incorrect; 'brought' is past tense, but the correct form here is 'bring' (base form) after 'have to'. Also, 'what' should be 'that' as a relative pronoun referring to 'things'.

× That's why when we made a list it that made things simpler.

✓ That's why when we make a list, it makes things simpler.

'Made' is past tense, but the sentence refers to a general truth or habitual action, so present tense 'make' and 'makes' should be used. Also, 'it that made' is redundant; 'it makes' suffices.

× Yes, I made a list for my work because it's remind me and make my things simpler to in a good manner way.

✓ Yes, I make a list for my work because it reminds me and makes my things simpler in a good manner.

'Made' is past tense but the context suggests habitual action, so 'make' is correct. 'It's remind' is incorrect; it should be 'it reminds' to agree with singular subject. 'Make my things simpler to in a good manner way' is awkward; corrected to 'makes my things simpler in a good manner'.

× Yes, I made a list for my work because it's remind me and make my things simpler to in a good manner way.

✓ Yes, I make a list for my work because it reminds me and makes my things simpler in a good manner.

'To in a good manner way' is incorrect prepositional usage. The correct phrase is 'in a good manner' or 'in a good way'.

× So through the list I can classify the what I have to do 1st and what is followed up.

✓ So through the list, I can classify what I have to do first and what needs to be followed up.

'The what' is incorrect; 'what' alone suffices. '1st' should be spelled out as 'first' in formal speech. 'What is followed up' is awkward; 'what needs to be followed up' is clearer.

× So let's make the thing simpler when I do something about like about work.

✓ So let's make things simpler when I do something related to work.

The original sentence is awkward and unclear. 'The thing simpler' should be 'things simpler'. 'Do something about like about work' is incorrect; 'do something related to work' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× I think they don't like to make a list because maybe their past work attitude or they are like grew up like that so up up to their attitude or their work experience.

✓ I think they don't like to make a list because of their past work attitude or because they grew up like that, so it depends on their attitude or work experience.

'Are like grew up' is incorrect; 'grew up' is past tense and should not be preceded by 'are like'. 'So up up to' is incorrect; 'so it depends on' is correct. Added 'because of' to clarify cause.

× I think they don't like to make a list because maybe their past work attitude or they are like grew up like that so up up to their attitude or their work experience.

✓ I think they don't like to make a list because of their past work attitude or because they grew up like that, so it depends on their attitude or work experience.

'Because' should be followed by 'of' when indicating cause: 'because of their past work attitude'. Also, 'up up to' is incorrect preposition usage; 'depends on' is correct.

× I like to make a list on a phone because it is easy to type and what we want we can add it so and we always keep our phone.

✓ I like to make a list on my phone because it is easy to type what we want and we can add items, and we always keep our phone with us.

'On a phone' is vague; 'on my phone' is more precise. 'What we want we can add it so' is awkward; rephrased to 'type what we want and we can add items'. Added 'with us' for clarity.