列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答は基本的な内容を伝えていますが、文法の誤り（"I find I find its very useful to what to buy in advance"）があり、自然な英語表現に改善が必要です。また、内容がやや単調で、具体的な理由や例を加えるとより効果的です。

範例: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember exactly what I need to buy and saves time. For example, last week, my list helped me avoid forgetting important items like milk and bread.

建議: 回答は質問に直接答えており、理由も述べていますが、文法の誤り（"before starting of work"）や繰り返し表現が見られます。接続詞を使って文をつなげると、より自然で流暢な印象になります。

範例: Yes, I usually make a to-do list each morning before starting work because it helps me stay organized. As a result, I can usually complete all my tasks by the end of the day.

建議: 回答が不明瞭で文法的にも誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。理由を明確にし、簡潔で自然な表現を心がけましょう。

範例: I'm not completely sure, but I think some people don't like making lists because it takes extra time and they prefer to decide what to do spontaneously.

建議: 文法の誤り（"prefer make a list on my form"）、語彙の誤用（"harbor phone"）があり、意味が分かりにくいです。正しい語彙を使い、文を簡潔にまとめることが重要です。

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always carry it with me, so I won't forget my schedule or tasks.

× Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because I find I find its very useful to what to buy in advance.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because I find it very useful to know what to buy in advance.

The phrase 'to what to buy' is incorrect; it should be 'to know what to buy' to properly use the verb + -ing form after 'useful'. Also, 'I find I find' is a repetition error and should be corrected to 'I find it'.

× Yes, I usually make a working list for each day before starting of work.

✓ Yes, I usually make a working list for each day before starting work.

The phrase 'starting of work' is incorrect; the preposition 'of' is unnecessary here. The correct phrase is 'starting work'.

× I think it's very helpful to remember what to do in that day.

✓ I think it's very helpful to remember what to do that day.

The use of 'in that day' is incorrect; the preposition 'in' is unnecessary. Also, 'that day' is sufficient to indicate the specific day without 'in'.

× Because of this list, I usually can finish the work in a day.

✓ Because of this list, I can usually finish the work in a day.

The adverb 'usually' should be placed before the main verb 'can' for correct sentence structure and natural English word order.

× Umm, I'm not sure about all about it, but I guess uh, because it takes too long time because you have to arrange a time before what you gonna do so.

✓ Umm, I'm not sure about all of it, but I guess it's because it takes too long time since you have to arrange your time before deciding what you're going to do.

The phrase 'all about it' is incorrect; it should be 'all of it'. Also, 'arrange a time before what you gonna do so' is ungrammatical and unclear; it should be rephrased for clarity and correct use of quantifiers and verb forms.

× Umm, I prefer make a list on my form because I always harbor phone so I there's no possibility to miss the schedule 'cause I have a phone every day and everywhere.

✓ Umm, I prefer to make a list on my phone because I always have my phone, so there's no possibility of missing the schedule since I have my phone every day and everywhere.

The phrase 'prefer make' is incorrect; it should be 'prefer to make'. 'On my form' is a typo and should be 'on my phone'. 'Harbor phone' is incorrect; it should be 'have my phone'. Also, 'possibility to miss' should be 'possibility of missing' to correctly use prepositions.