列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'umm' to make your answer sound more natural and fluent. Also, be careful with grammar, for example, say 'anything' instead of 'an anything'. Keep your sentences clear and concise, and try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list before I go shopping because it helps me stick to my budget. Moreover, having a list means I can plan my purchases better and avoid buying unnecessary items.

建議: Your answer is a bit repetitive and has some grammatical errors. Try to directly answer the question and use linking words to explain why it works. Also, avoid repeating the same phrases and improve sentence structure for clarity.

範例: Yes, I make lists for my work, and they are very effective. Because I follow the list strictly, I can focus on important tasks and avoid distractions, which helps me manage my time better.

建議: Avoid filler words and improve sentence structure to make your answer clearer. Use proper grammar and try to give more specific reasons with linking words to connect your ideas logically.

範例: I think some people dislike making lists because they find it unnecessary and prefer to shop spontaneously. Additionally, some may feel that making lists is too time-consuming or boring.

建議: Good answer with clear reasons, but try to avoid informal words like 'cause' and improve sentence flow. Also, correct small mistakes like 'lease' instead of 'list'. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

範例: I prefer to make my shopping list on my phone because it is more environmentally friendly and convenient. Furthermore, if I lose my phone, I can easily recover the list from backups, unlike paper lists.

× I won't buy an anything out of my budget.

✓ I won't buy anything out of my budget.

The word 'anything' is an indefinite pronoun and does not require an article like 'an' before it. Using 'an' before 'anything' is incorrect. The correct form is simply 'anything'. Suggestion: Remove the article 'an' before 'anything'.

× when I have a shopping list while I was shopping with me

✓ when I have a shopping list with me while I am shopping

The phrase 'while I was shopping with me' is incorrect because 'with me' is unnecessary and the tense is inconsistent. The correct preposition to indicate possession is 'with me', but it should be placed properly. Also, the tense should be present continuous 'am shopping' to match 'when I have'. Suggestion: Use 'with me' correctly and maintain consistent tense.

× because the lazy and another one is that they think that

✓ because they are lazy and another reason is that they think that

The phrase 'the lazy' is incorrect as it uses a definite article with an adjective without a noun. It should be 'they are lazy' to refer to people. Also, 'another one' is vague; 'another reason' is clearer. Suggestion: Replace 'the lazy' with 'they are lazy' and specify 'another reason'.

× While they can just while walk, uh, walking through the shopping, shopping mall, they can buy anything they, they think of their mind.

✓ They can just walk through the shopping mall and buy anything they think of in their mind.

The sentence has redundant and misplaced words like 'while' repeated and awkward phrasing 'they think of their mind'. The correct structure is to say 'They can just walk through the shopping mall and buy anything they think of'. Suggestion: Remove redundant words and restructure the sentence for clarity.

× I think I'll prefer to make a lease on my phone because it's more environment friendly

✓ I think I'll prefer to make a list on my phone because it's more environmentally friendly

The word 'lease' is incorrect here; the intended word is 'list'. Also, 'environment friendly' should be 'environmentally friendly' as an adverb modifies the adjective. Suggestion: Replace 'lease' with 'list' and use 'environmentally friendly'.