列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，比如“make me lose some importancy”表达不准确。建议你用更自然的表达方式，并且避免重复和冗余。可以先直接回答问题，然后用具体原因支持。

範例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember what I need to buy and saves time. For example, last week I bought everything on my list without forgetting anything.

建議: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够流畅。建议简洁明了地回答问题，并用连词连接句子，使表达更连贯。

範例: Yes, I make lists for my work because it helps me keep track of important tasks and improves my efficiency. For instance, I write down daily goals to ensure nothing is missed.

建議: 回答语法错误严重，表达混乱，缺乏逻辑。建议先直接回答问题，然后用具体原因支持，注意语法和句子结构。

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to remember things mentally. For example, my friend thinks lists are unnecessary and relies on memory instead.

建議: 回答中有重复和不完整的句子，表达不够自然。建议用完整句子表达观点，并用连词连接，使表达更流畅。

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always have it with me. Using an app is more convenient than paper since I can easily add or remove items anytime.

× Yes, I will make a list when I go to the shop because it is very useful for me.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I go to the shop because it is very useful for me.

这里使用一般现在时更合适，因为描述的是习惯性动作，而不是将来计划。助动词“will”不符合习惯性行为的表达。

× It can make me lose some importancy and make me know something that I should buy.

✓ It can help me avoid forgetting important things and let me know what I should buy.

“lose some importancy”表达不正确，应该用“avoid forgetting important things”来表达避免忘记重要事项；“make me know”不自然，改为“let me know”更合适。

× Yes, uh, because my work is very busy so I should make a list to help me know some important thing and can help me remember some important thing and it helps me work efficiently and.

✓ Yes, because my work is very busy, so I should make a list to help me remember some important things, and it helps me work efficiently.

“some important thing”应为复数“some important things”，因为指多个事项；句子末尾“and”多余，应去掉。

× And because some people doesn't don't have a making list habit, so they doesn't, so they don't make make a list for their work and learning.

✓ Because some people don't have the habit of making lists, they don't make a list for their work and learning.

“some people”是复数，助动词应为“don't”而非“doesn't”；“making list habit”表达不自然，改为“the habit of making lists”；重复词“doesn't”和“make”应删除。

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because phone is always always kept with me.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because my phone is always with me.

“phone”前缺少物主代词“my”，且“kept with me”表达不自然，改为“is always with me”。

× I should say my thing by application, so it is very convenient rather than listed on the paper.

✓ I use an app to make my list, so it is more convenient than listing on paper.

“say my thing by application”表达不正确，改为“use an app”；“rather than listed on the paper”应为“more convenient than listing on paper”，比较结构错误。