列表— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Do you make a list when you shop?
考生
Not necessary, only if I have 4 things or more in mind. Usually when I go shopping I buy around two to three things Max, but if I have more to buy I usually make a list on my phone because I carry it with me everywhere and it's more accessible for me.
考官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
考生
I'm still a student, I haven't got a job yet, but when I do I will probably use a list only for writing down certain dates and times. I'm good at memorization in general, but the only problem for me is numbers, so I think writing down the specific dates will save me a lot of time instead of just hoping I will remember them.
考官
Why don't some people like making lists?
考生
Because not everyone is organized, and some people are more comfortable in abstract methods. And I think this option works as well, as long as it works the way it's supposed to. For example, instead of remembering a specific date, you can associate it with a family member of yours whose date is close to this one.
考官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
考生
I prefer making a list on my phone, although using a paper is also a good alternative. I'm more comfortable using my phone mostly because I spend quite a lot of time on it. Another reason why I prefer it is because I carried all the time with myself, so no matter what I write down, I don't have to worry about losing it.
評估
總分
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
分數: 85.0建議: Опитайте се да направите отговора си по-естествен и по-структуриран, като започнете с директен отговор на въпроса, след това добавите подкрепящи детайли с подходящи свързващи думи. Избягвайте излишни повторения и използвайте по-разнообразен речник.
範例: I usually don't make a list when I shop because I only buy a few items. However, if I need to buy four or more things, I make a list on my phone since I always have it with me, which makes it very convenient.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
分數: 80.0建議: Отговорът е ясен, но може да бъде по-естествен и по-структуриран. Използвайте свързващи думи, за да направите отговора по-логичен и добавете по-конкретни примери или причини.
範例: Although I am still a student and don't have a job yet, I plan to use lists at work to note important dates and times. Since I find it hard to remember numbers, writing them down will help me avoid mistakes and save time.
Why don't some people like making lists?
分數: 88.0建議: Отговорът е добър, но може да бъде по-естествен и по-структуриран. Използвайте свързващи думи за плавен преход между идеите и добавете по-конкретни примери.
範例: Some people dislike making lists because they are not very organized and prefer more abstract methods. For instance, they might remember important dates by associating them with a family member's birthday, which works well for them.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
分數: 90.0建議: Отговорът е ясен и добре структуриран, но може да бъде по-естествен чрез използване на свързващи думи и по-разнообразен речник. Опитайте да направите изреченията по-кратки и по-ясни.
範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because I use it a lot and always carry it with me. Although paper lists are useful, using my phone ensures I don't lose my notes and can access them anytime.
文法
× Not necessary, only if I have 4 things or more in mind.
✓ Not necessary, only if I have 4 things or more in mind.
This sentence is grammatically correct regarding singular and plural usage; no correction needed.
× Usually when I go shopping I buy around two to three things Max, but if I have more to buy I usually make a list on my phone because I carry it with me everywhere and it's more accessible for me.
✓ Usually when I go shopping I buy around two to three things max, but if I have more to buy I usually make a list on my phone because I carry it with me everywhere and it's more accessible for me.
The word 'Max' should be lowercase 'max' as it is an abbreviation of 'maximum' used informally here; this is a style issue rather than a grammar problem.
× I'm still a student, I haven't got a job yet, but when I do I will probably use a list only for writing down certain dates and times.
✓ I'm still a student, I haven't got a job yet, but when I do, I will probably use a list only for writing down certain dates and times.
A comma is needed after 'when I do' to separate clauses properly; this improves sentence clarity and structure.
× Another reason why I prefer it is because I carried all the time with myself, so no matter what I write down, I don't have to worry about losing it.
✓ Another reason why I prefer it is because I carry it all the time with me, so no matter what I write down, I don't have to worry about losing it.
The verb 'carried' is incorrectly used in past tense; the present tense 'carry' fits the context. Also, 'with myself' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'with me'.
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