列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is generally clear but contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to use simpler and more natural sentences, and avoid repeating similar ideas. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list. It helps me remember the groceries needed for my kitchen, especially since I usually do the shopping for my family.

建議: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Avoid repetition and try to finish your sentences fully. Use linking words to explain why making a list is helpful.

範例: Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me remember the most important tasks. This way, I can complete them on time and stay organized.

建議: Your answer has several grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases. Try to express your ideas clearly and use correct vocabulary. Also, avoid repeating words and use linking words to explain reasons.

範例: Some people do not like making lists because it takes time to prepare them, and they find writing on paper tedious.

建議: Your answer is understandable but has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use more natural expressions and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to explain your preference clearly.

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always carry it with me. This way, I can easily check my list anytime, which is not possible with paper lists.

× I make a list of different groceries that are required in my kitchens.

✓ I make a list of different groceries that are required in my kitchen.

The word 'kitchens' is plural, but in this context, it should be singular 'kitchen' because it refers to the kitchen of the speaker's home. Using the singular form is appropriate here.

× Normally in my family I used to go for the shoppings for which the list is very important to remember the items that I need to buy.

✓ Normally in my family I used to go shopping for which the list is very important to remember the items that I need to buy.

The word 'shoppings' is incorrect because 'shopping' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized. The correct form is 'go shopping'.

× Yes, I make. I usually make a list for for the Warhawks because making a list helps me to remember the utmost important tasks that I need to complete earlier and it may save.

✓ Yes, I do. I usually make a list for the Warhawks because making a list helps me remember the most important tasks that I need to complete earlier and it may save time.

The response 'Yes, I make' is incomplete; it should be 'Yes, I do' to answer the question properly. Also, 'utmost important' should be 'most important' for correct usage. The sentence was incomplete, so 'it may save time' is added for clarity.

× Some people may not like preparing the least because it may take take sometimes before preparing the list and some people think it is more tedious making the in the paper seat.

✓ Some people may not like preparing the list because it may take some time before preparing the list and some people think it is more tedious to make it on paper.

The word 'least' is incorrect; it should be 'list'. The phrase 'take take sometimes' is redundant and incorrect; it should be 'take some time'. 'Making the in the paper seat' is unclear and corrected to 'make it on paper' for clarity and correctness.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone rather than the paper because I usually carry my phone always with me and so that every time when I want to check the list I switch on my phone and look the least.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone rather than on paper because I usually always carry my phone with me, so every time I want to check the list, I switch on my phone and look at the list.

The phrase 'rather than the paper' should be 'rather than on paper' to correctly use the preposition. 'Look the least' is incorrect; it should be 'look at the list'. Also, 'carry my phone always' is better as 'usually always carry my phone' for natural word order.