列表— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Do you make a list when you shop?
考生
No, I don't make a list, but before I shop I would make a list in my mind, like just think about what I would buy. But it depends. Some of them I may not buy but some of them yes I will.
考官
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
考生
No, I usually don't make a list because I think I'm a more flexible person. I'd like to do things that whatever comes to my mind, but I won't make a list before I do them because many times I tried but it just didn't work.
考官
Why don't some people like making lists?
考生
Well, from my perspective, first, it's because they did make lists before, but they found that unexpected things always came up to interrupt their plans, so they didn't make lists anymore. And for another thing, it makes them anxious.
考官
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
考生
I don't like making lists, but if I do, I'd rather make a list on paper because on paper it's more convenient for me to check my schedule to see what a mess or what I already done. And also I like writing on paper. I just like the texture of paper.
評估
總分
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
分數: 70.0建議: 回答时语言较为口语化且有些重复，建议简化表达，避免冗余，同时增加连接词使句子更连贯。
範例: No, I don't usually make a written list when I shop. Instead, I mentally plan what I need to buy, although sometimes I change my mind and don't buy everything I thought of.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
分數: 75.0建議: 回答结构清晰，但表达略显重复，建议使用连接词并丰富细节，使表达更自然流畅。
範例: No, I usually don't make lists for work because I prefer to be flexible. Although I have tried making lists before, they often didn't help me stay organized, so I stopped using them.
Why don't some people like making lists?
分數: 80.0建議: 回答内容具体且有逻辑，但可以使用更多连接词使句子更连贯，同时避免重复表达。
範例: From my perspective, some people dislike making lists because unexpected events often disrupt their plans, which can be frustrating. Additionally, making lists might cause them anxiety about completing all tasks.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
分數: 75.0建議: 回答表达较为口语化且有些重复，建议简化句子结构，使用连接词，并注意语法准确性。
範例: Although I don't often make lists, I prefer using paper when I do because it's easier to check my schedule and I enjoy the feel of writing on paper.
文法
× many times I tried but it just didn't work.
✓ many times I have tried but it just didn't work.
这里描述的是过去发生多次的经历，应该使用现在完成时态（have tried）来表达过去发生的动作对现在的影响。
× what a mess or what I already done.
✓ what a mess or what I have already done.
这里“done”是过去分词，应该用现在完成时态“have done”来表达已经完成的动作。
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