列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答表达了基本意思，但语法和用词不够准确，且有重复词汇。建议注意时态一致性，避免重复，并且使句子更简洁自然。

範例: Sometimes I make a detailed shopping list when I need many items, but usually I just walk around the grocery store and decide what to cook for dinner.

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题。建议注意主谓一致，使用正确的时态，并且避免重复表达，使句子更流畅。

範例: I make a daily list to organize tasks that need to be done today. I also prepare a weekly list to plan what I should do during the week. Usually, these lists help me stay organized.

建議: 回答语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议使用更准确的词汇和句式，避免重复，并且使句子结构完整。

範例: Maybe some people are confident in managing their time, so they think making a list is a waste of time.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清的问题。建议简化句子结构，注意语法正确性，并且清晰表达观点。

範例: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient than paper. With technology, I can add details like dates and priorities to each task easily.

× Sometimes I will arrange a detailed list when there were tons of things required, but most of the time I'll just wander around the grocery store store and think about what was for dinner.

✓ Sometimes I will arrange a detailed list when there are tons of things required, but most of the time I'll just wander around the grocery store and think about what is for dinner.

句中使用了过去时态“were”，但描述的是一般现在时的情况，应使用现在时“are”。另外，“what was for dinner”应为“what is for dinner”，因为谈论的是当前或将来的晚餐。

× Sometimes I will arrange a detailed list when there were tons of things required, but most of the time I'll just wander around the grocery store store and think about what was for dinner.

✓ Sometimes I will arrange a detailed list when there are tons of things required, but most of the time I'll just wander around the grocery store and think about what is for dinner.

句中“grocery store store”重复，应删除一个“store”。

× I will make a daily list to arrange several things that is necessary to done today.

✓ I will make a daily list to arrange several things that are necessary to be done today.

“things”是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式“are”。

× I will make a daily list to arrange several things that is necessary to done today.

✓ I will make a daily list to arrange several things that are necessary to be done today.

“done”作为过去分词，前面应加“to be”构成被动不定式，表示“需要被完成”。

× Also, I will write a week list to predict any things I should do for the week.

✓ Also, I will write a weekly list to predict any things I should do for the week.

“week list”应改为形容词形式“weekly list”来修饰名词。

× Also, I will write a week list to predict any things I should do for the week.

✓ Also, I will write a weekly list to predict anything I should do for the week.

“any things”应合并为不可数名词“anything”，更符合表达习惯。

× Most of the time it will it works.

✓ Most of the time it works.

句中“will it works”结构混乱，应简化为“it works”，表示一般现在时的习惯动作。

× Maybe they were very confident about their time ranging ability in that in that case making a list a waste of their time.

✓ Maybe they are very confident about their time managing ability; in that case, making a list is a waste of their time.

描述现在的情况应使用现在时“are”，并且句子结构不完整，缺少谓语动词，应补充“is”。

× Maybe they were very confident about their time ranging ability in that in that case making a list a waste of their time.

✓ Maybe they are very confident about their time managing ability; in that case, making a list is a waste of their time.

“in that in that case”重复且用法不当，应改为“in that case”。

× I prefer to make a list on my phone, it's more convenient than using a pen and a piece of paper.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone; it's more convenient than using a pen and a piece of paper.

句中逗号连接两个独立分句，应使用分号或句号。

× Also, it you think high technology I can list each things that I should do the detailing with the date and the ability that I require it requires.

✓ Also, if you think about high technology, I can list each thing that I should do in detail with the date and the ability that I require.

句中“it you think”应为“if you think”，“each things”应为“each thing”，“the detailing”应为“in detail”，“it requires”重复且多余，应删除。