列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains grammatical errors. Try to be more concise and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure for clarity.

範例: No, I don't make a list when I shop because I prefer to memorize the items. This method helps me stay focused and keeps my mind active, although sometimes I forget some products.

建議: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and some redundancy. Use linking words to connect your ideas and improve sentence variety. Also, correct verb forms and avoid repeating the same idea.

範例: No, I don't make lists for work because I prefer to memorize my tasks. This approach helps me stay focused and keeps my mind active, as lists usually don't work well for me.

建議: Your answer is clear but contains grammatical errors and could be more concise. Use linking words to improve coherence and correct subject-verb agreement.

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to memorize items themselves. Additionally, those with good memories may not feel the need to use lists.

建議: Your answer is incomplete and contains grammatical errors. Try to complete your thoughts clearly, use correct verb forms, and avoid awkward phrases. Also, explain your preference with specific reasons.

範例: I prefer to make lists on paper because I enjoy the tactile feeling of writing with my hands. Writing on the phone feels less personal and less engaging to me.

× I like when I memorize something.

✓ I like memorizing something.

The verb 'like' is commonly followed by a gerund (-ing form) when expressing enjoyment of an activity. Therefore, 'like memorizing' is correct instead of 'like when I memorize'.

× It's never become catalyst to make a list.

✓ It has never become a catalyst to make a list.

The present perfect tense requires 'has' or 'have' plus the past participle. 'Become' is the past participle here, so 'has never become' is correct. Also, the article 'a' is needed before 'catalyst'.

× I love memorize the things and I enjoy doing it.

✓ I love memorizing things and I enjoy doing it.

After verbs like 'love' and 'enjoy', the gerund (-ing form) should be used. Therefore, 'love memorizing' is correct instead of 'love memorize'. Also, 'the things' can be simplified to 'things' for natural expression.

× Some people does not need lists because they have good memory and don't have a necessity to use it.

✓ Some people do not need lists because they have good memory and don't have a necessity to use them.

The subject 'Some people' is plural, so the verb should be 'do' instead of 'does'. Also, 'lists' is plural, so the pronoun should be 'them' instead of 'it'.

× I like to when I touch the paper and use my hands to write things down.

✓ I like it when I touch the paper and use my hands to write things down.

The phrase 'like to when' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'like it when' to introduce a clause explaining what is liked.

× When I write on the phone it's feels like out of my.

✓ When I write on the phone, it feels like it's out of me.

The auxiliary 'it's' is unnecessary before 'feels'. Also, the phrase 'like out of my' is incomplete and unclear; 'like it's out of me' is a clearer expression. A comma is added after the introductory clause for clarity.