列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details using linking words. Keep your answer concise and natural.

範例: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember what I need to buy. For example, I write down all the items before going to the store, which makes shopping quicker and more organized.

建議: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and unclear. Start with a clear topic sentence, then use linking words to explain how making lists helps you at work, providing specific details.

範例: Yes, I make lists for my work because I repair trucks. For instance, before going to the workshop, I list the parts that need fixing, which helps me stay organized and efficient.

建議: Your answer is confusing and does not directly address the question. Try to clearly explain reasons why some people avoid making lists, using simple and correct sentences with supporting details.

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they believe they can remember everything. For example, they trust their memory and feel that writing lists is unnecessary.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Clearly state your preference and explain why, using linking words and specific reasons.

範例: I prefer to make lists on paper because it is easier for me. Also, I can write in my own language, which helps me remember things better.

× Just suddenly I'm making a list when I'm go to something wise so it will it is easy for me, easy for me to purchase the things which is I am going to purchase.

✓ Just suddenly I'm making a list when I go to something wise so it will be easy for me to purchase the things which I am going to purchase.

The phrase 'I'm go' is incorrect because 'go' should be in the base form after 'I'm' only if it is part of a continuous tense, but here it is not. The correct form is 'I go'. Also, 'it will it is easy' is redundant; 'it will be easy' is correct. Additionally, 'which is I am going to purchase' should be 'which I am going to purchase' to avoid unnecessary 'is'. These corrections improve sentence clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× So I am reading all the paper and giving the product.

✓ So I am reading all the papers and giving the product.

The phrase 'reading all the paper' is incorrect because 'paper' is uncountable in this context; it should be plural 'papers' if referring to multiple sheets. Also, 'giving the product' is unclear and may be contextually incorrect, but since it does not match any listed grammar problem types, only the preposition and pluralization issue is corrected here.

× That's why I'm making a list when I'm on the work because of when I'm going to the work.

✓ That's why I'm making a list when I'm at work because when I'm going to work.

The preposition 'on' is incorrect with 'work'; the correct preposition is 'at' when referring to being present at a workplace. Also, 'going to the work' should be 'going to work' without 'the' as 'work' here is uncountable and general.

× So my work is related to that transport.

✓ So my work is related to transport.

The word 'transport' is uncountable in this context and does not require 'that'. Removing 'that' makes the sentence grammatically correct and natural.

× I'm doing it when I go to the workshop, so I'm making a list of what is repairing to the truck.

✓ I'm doing it when I go to the workshop, so I'm making a list of what is repairing the truck.

The preposition 'to' after 'repairing' is incorrect. The verb 'repair' is transitive and should directly take the object without a preposition. Therefore, 'repairing the truck' is correct.

× Some people don't like to make English because of what they are thinking about.

✓ Some people don't like to make lists because of what they are thinking about.

The phrase 'make English' is incorrect and likely a misstatement. The intended meaning is probably 'make lists'. Correcting this pronoun and noun usage clarifies the sentence.

× I have a lot of knowledge, so I I they are thinking they are.

✓ I have a lot of knowledge, so they think they are.

The sentence contains redundant and confusing pronouns 'I I they are thinking they are'. Simplifying to 'they think they are' corrects the pronoun misuse and improves clarity.

× They not forget the things, so they remind in the mind.

✓ They do not forget things, so they keep them in mind.

The phrase 'They not forget' lacks the auxiliary verb 'do' for negation. Also, 'remind in the mind' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'keep them in mind'. These corrections fix pronoun and verb usage errors.

× So that's why they are not believing.

✓ So that's why they do not believe.

The verb 'believe' is stative and not used in continuous form. 'Are not believing' is incorrect; the simple present 'do not believe' is appropriate here.

× I make this time prefer to the make the list on the paper because of the IT is the IT is easy way to easy way for me and when I am writing something else I am writing in the my own language so it is easy for a right hand animate.

✓ This time, I prefer to make the list on paper because it is an easy way for me, and when I am writing something else, I write in my own language, so it is easy for me to write.

The original sentence has multiple preposition errors: 'prefer to the make' should be 'prefer to make'; 'on the paper' should be 'on paper'; 'because of the IT is the IT is easy way' is redundant and incorrect; 'in the my own language' should be 'in my own language'; 'easy for a right hand animate' is unclear and likely intended as 'easy for me to write'. These corrections address preposition misuse and improve sentence clarity.