列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer needs to be clearer and more natural. Try to directly answer the question with a simple topic sentence, then add specific reasons using linking words. Avoid unclear phrases like 'make a little show' and grammatical errors. For example, you can say, 'Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me shop systematically and avoid forgetting items.'

範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me shop systematically and avoid forgetting items. Moreover, it saves time as I know exactly what to buy, which makes the process efficient.

建議: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Please respond directly to the question with a clear topic sentence and explain how making lists helps your work. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid irrelevant words like 'meme'.

範例: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and complete tasks efficiently. As a result, I can manage my time better and improve my productivity.

建議: Your answer is on the right track but needs to be more fluent and natural. Avoid repeating words and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to explain reasons clearly and provide specific details.

範例: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming and requiring extra effort. Additionally, they may prefer to rely on memory or find lists restrictive.

建議: Your answer has good ideas but is repetitive and grammatically incorrect. Try to express your preference clearly with a topic sentence, then support it with specific reasons using linking words. Avoid repeating words and improve sentence flow.

範例: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is convenient and always with me. Moreover, digital lists are easy to edit and less likely to be lost compared to paper lists.

× Yes, I make a little show when I saw them because it is to make my shopping very easy and systematically.

✓ Yes, I make a little show when I see them because it is to make my shopping very easy and systematic.

The verb 'saw' is the past tense, but the sentence context requires present tense 'see' to match 'I make'. Also, 'systematically' is an adverb but should be 'systematic', an adjective, to describe 'shopping'.

× It is to remember what I need to bring a commodity and it will not be a confusing.

✓ It is to remember what I need to buy and it will not be confusing.

The phrase 'bring a commodity' is incorrect; 'buy' is the correct verb here. Also, 'a confusing' is incorrect; 'confusing' is an adjective and should not have an article 'a'.

× Yes Sir, I make a list of for my work at it is to make a meme or systematically and good at my work.

✓ Yes Sir, I make a list for my work as it is to make my work more systematic and good.

The phrase 'make a list of for my work at' is incorrect; 'make a list for my work' is correct. 'Make a meme or systematically' is unclear; likely intended 'make my work more systematic'.

× According to my knowledge, some people don't like to make a list because. Because it is a, it is a time consuming and need a more effort to make a list.

✓ According to my knowledge, some people don't like to make a list because it is time-consuming and needs more effort to make a list.

The sentence incorrectly repeats 'because' and uses 'a time consuming' which should be 'time-consuming' as an adjective. Also, 'need a more effort' should be 'needs more effort' to agree with singular subject 'it'.

× I prefer to make a list on on my phone because it is a age of modernization and as a as a person born in modernized society, I keep my phones everywhere when where I go and and it and paper is unreliable.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is the age of modernization and as a person born in a modernized society, I keep my phone with me everywhere I go and paper is unreliable.

The phrase 'a age' should be 'the age' as 'age' is a specific noun here. 'Phones' should be singular 'phone' to match 'I keep my phone'. Extra words like 'on on', 'as a as a', 'when where', and 'and and it and' are redundant and removed for clarity.