列表— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够自然，句子较长且有重复。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更自然的表达方式。

範例: Yes, I always make a shopping list because I tend to forget what I need. Without a list, I often buy unnecessary items and forget important ones.

建議: 回答中有语法错误和拼写错误（如“A to do list”，“PE person”），表达不够流畅。建议注意语法和拼写，使用连贯的句子表达观点。

範例: Yes, I like to make a to-do list at work because it helps me plan my tasks for today and the future. Since I am not very organized, the list is very useful for me.

建議: 回答中语法结构混乱，表达重复且不够连贯。建议使用更简洁的句子，注意主谓一致和连词使用，使表达更自然。

範例: In my opinion, some people dislike making lists because they believe they can manage their work at their own pace. However, I find it difficult without a plan, though some may work better without one.

建議: 回答较自然且内容具体，但部分句子结构稍显重复。建议适当使用连接词，使表达更流畅。

範例: That's an interesting question. I used to make lists on my phone, but I often got distracted by other apps. So now, I write my to-do lists on paper, and crossing off completed tasks gives me great satisfaction.

× I always make a list when I shop since I am a very forgettable person and I have to remind myself what should I buy and what should not.

✓ I always make a list when I shop since I am a very forgetful person and I have to remind myself what I should buy and what I should not.

句子中“what should I buy”语序错误，疑问句语序不适用于陈述句，应改为“what I should buy”。此外，“forgettable”应为“forgetful”，表示“健忘的”。

× I buy because sometimes I always end up with buying things that I don't need and forgot to buy things that I really have to I really need.

✓ Sometimes I always end up buying things that I don't need and forget to buy things that I really need.

句子中“forgot”时态不一致，应与前后时态保持一致，改为“forget”。另外，“I buy because”不合逻辑，应去掉。

× I would like to make A to do list when I work because it reminds me to plan what should I do today and even plan for the future.

✓ I would like to make a to-do list when I work because it reminds me to plan what I should do today and even plan for the future.

“A to do list”中的“A”应为小写“a”，且“to do list”应连字符为“to-do list”。另外，“what should I do”语序错误，应为“what I should do”。

× I think my To Do List is very useful for me because I am not very organized PE person so it helped me a lot.

✓ I think my to-do list is very useful for me because I am not a very organized person, so it helps me a lot.

“PE person”不合适，应去掉“PE”。“helped”时态应与现在时态保持一致，改为“helps”。

× people don't like to make list is because that they think they could handle their work, their pace, by their self, by themselves.

✓ People don't like to make lists because they think they can handle their work and pace by themselves.

句子结构混乱，“is because that”多余，应简化为“because”。“by their self”应为“by themselves”。

× people don't like to make list is because that they think they could handle their work, their pace, by their self, by themselves.

✓ People don't like to make lists because they think they can handle their work and pace by themselves.

“make list”应为“make lists”，名词复数形式。

× some people might work even better if they don't have A to do list or a plan.

✓ Some people might work even better if they don't have a to-do list or a plan.

“A to do list”中的“A”应为小写“a”，且“to do list”应连字符为“to-do list”。

× I used to make a list on my phone, but it ends up that every time I look at my To Do List, I will play my phone.

✓ I used to make a list on my phone, but it ends up that every time I look at my to-do list, I play on my phone.

“play my phone”表达不正确，应为“play on my phone”。

× And every time I cross out the thing that I have to do, it gives me a lot of joy.

✓ Every time I cross out a thing that I have to do, it gives me a lot of joy.

“the thing”改为“a thing”更自然，表示泛指。